well then start already! lol, i don't mid waiting for an update, you only have one chapter. unlike people who leave a story hanging in the middle of it, i shouldn't talk though, that is exactly what i've done with my stories :/

This is an interesting idea, and you managed to keep everyone in character. Well done.

If you want to stay in canon, though, I'm going to have to ask you to delete that part about Lilly's brother. Lilly doesn't have a brother. She MIGHT have a sister, but no brother. This was confirmed in the episode with the field trip to Washington...

(Miley and Jackson are arguing)

Lilly: (turns to Oliver) Sometimes I wish I had a brother. Then I come over here. All better!