Poor Hrist. That's too true, yet She surprised me, (I was intentionally not trying to guess any of the story as I played, I wanted to enjoy it as I went ^.^)

Hey, Here's an Idea, What about warning signs regarding Dylan and Brams?

Or maybe, warning signs regarding Odin, and/or Freya? (If Lenneth's There then she can add her two cents, or maybe Silmeria Can chide her for being blind to them using her.)

Bravo.

Oh my...*hahaha hahaha! Kneel down before me!*

I guess it was pretty obvious after all ^.^

Keep It up!

Silmeria's so outraged, hehe. "NONE of you noticed?...NONE of you thought that was suspicious?"

oh please do a dylan that would be very nice.

Are you going to go into the issue of Rufus not clicking on that there were two souls in Alicia until they were in Dipan?

I really didn't know it was her the first time i played the game, though I KNEW the minute she spoke to the dead man in the volcano. This made me laugh.

Lezard REALLY surprised me though, seriously...

Thanks for reviewing my VP story!

With the way everyone's conversations sound like, I imagine this image of everyone huddled around a roaring campfire and telling stories of past memories. :) You can never get enough humor fics in the VP section. Great job!

XD *chuckle* Very enjoyable! The good old lizard comment. XD Believe it or not, the name Lezard was ripped by Square as "Lazard" for a FFVII character. *passes out* I can't fathom why!

:D The beginning conversation was entertaining and the flashback was equally enjoyable. I think you should definitely continue this! ^-^ The VP section needs more love, and humor-genre fics are always fun. :D

Great work! Update soon! *adds to alert*



The Final Hikari

Hahahaha!

“…Wow,” said Rufus. “Yeah, it was pretty obvious, wasn’t it?”

Great. : )

That was funny and well-written. I love it! Yeah, it was pretty obvious he was the villain. Especially obvious if Silmeria bothered to play the original game.