OH. SHIT.

This was epic!

...Aand it seems you're a mega-author! How much other stuff have you written for Coraline...?

O.o! a great idea to come out as a Coraline fanfic! XD

and it described nicely... keep writting!

wow! you are a good writer

An amazing aftermath of what Coraline had to go through after the events of the Other World. I liked the idea of how she was haunted and tormented of the "what if"s and the "could-have-been"s. Because few people could go through what she did and make it back entirely the same. Great job!

*applauds* That was good! I was wondering why there were no book fics for Coraline. Good job!

That was intense- the dark visions are very descriptive. I could just picture it. Good job

Wicked piece of work, defenately one thing Coraline would be haunted for sure.

Invader Johnny Signing Off.

Really great job on this story! I love the concept of it, how Coraline cannot truly escape from what happened to her. I'm happy it's based off the book too, there isn't a lot of people writing from the book-verse. Again, great job!