The plot isn't interesting, sad to say, and the grammar and vocab ain't very good too. I'm sorry, but wad can I say? 1/5.

Wow ivthink I have heard the word ponder one more time I might comity suicide

Do not write stories they are not mildly interesting to read at all make it adventurous and exciting I really don't need to hear about an adamant shield

I just wanted to say this is pretty good!By the way,I hope you continue the series soon!I also have a runescape account and go by the name Queenzezi. :)

Heres a few things I have to say:

1.) Copper Goblin scares me

2.) Your grammer needs work

3.) I like how you managed to add skill levels

4.) omg im obsessed.
THAT IS ALL 〒.〒

hee...hee...*sigh*

I apologise for my last review. I didn't read your account. You HAVE got a spellchecker, that is broken.

Hee...good story...continue...*sigh, snore, falls asleep*

Hee hee hee...

The Copper Goblin...

Hey man, this is the copper goblin. Hee hee hee...swooping on the RS stories, intent on ruling the world...

This story ain't half bad. Just two MAJOR flaws-the chapters are way too short. one paragraph doesn't count as a chapter, man. Also, your grammar and spelling is despicable. USE A SPELLCHECKER. Honestly, you should LISTEN in your English classes a bit more. hee hee hee...

Idea-Sir Strom decides to attack dragons for their hide to sell, but finds that a bit harder then he originally thought...

Hee hee hee...

the copper goblin...

P.S. If you want to see a TRULY good story, check out Mainiac97's story. I find that fantasic-I reccommend it entirely. Hee hee hee...

wow. this is good. And I mean good! In fact, it goes beyond good. And you actualy play RS(don't you?) because some authors just read other fics and decide to write their own based on them. But this, this is a real fic from a real RS player. Maybe more adventure in the next chapter? But this is just to good for words!! Keep up the good work! looking forward to more!