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KT324
2009-08-22 . chapter 6
Aww, it's over :( But I loved every second of it.

Hope to see a sequel soon! I'd love to see the continuation of this!

*fav story*
*author alert*

-KT ^-^
KT324
2009-08-22 . chapter 5
ENRICO! *clings to body* X'C

The intensity is really totaling up...I'm excited to see what's next! :D

-KT ^-^
KT324
2009-08-22 . chapter 4
It's totally Julie! D:

My, my, I must compliment you on the action-y scene on the balcony! :)

Lovely work once again!

-KT ^-^
KT324
2009-08-22 . chapter 3
Yes! The Dynamic Duo reunited!

A pleasure to see Will in this chapter, seeing these two makes my heart throb at the friendship they shared.

*gasp* A cliffhanger?! Ugh! Must...resist...next chapter button... XD

-KT ^-^
KT324
2009-08-22 . chapter 2
I would feel so creeped out if someone was watching me on surveillance o_0

Loved Wesker in this chapter, he's such a smart aleck XD

"Just as I thought, not much of a weapon. If that girl had had a gun instead, I wouldn’t have to worry about Chris anymore..." XD

-KT ^-^
KT324
2009-08-22 . chapter 1
Poor, poor Wesker, I feel so bad he had his heart ripped to shreds... *huggles Albert*

Wonderful start Mlie! ;)

-KT ^-^
Vogue Dirge
2009-07-05 . chapter 5
Hey Mlie! It's Vogue.

I really enjoyed this story, it's very clever, and I love that you detailed what Wesker was doing during all of this.
shadownip
2009-06-09 . chapter 4
great chapter, cant wait for more.
Agent Krivins
2009-06-05 . chapter 3
It's good to see William back in here. The voice interaction between him and Wesker is amazing. Very realistic. Gosh, you have to tell me how you do that. I try but can't seem to get it right. I'm always missing something. Amazing work on that anyway.

Birkin and Wesker still have a pretty good relationship. They are quite open with eachother just like in the game itself. It would seem Birkin had some trouble getting to the control room where Wesker is located. But the two, like I said seem to be good buds. In an evil sort of way. This is good stuff so far.

Oh, maybe Birkin went a little too far with the mentioning the past. Even though they are friends and have been for awhile, mentioning the past at such a time could have critical results. It does seem obvious Wesker is still bitter about the betrayal that happened with Julia. I can't say I blame him though. Such an event made him who he is. Such a sad story.

Things seem to have taken a different turn in this story then the original storyline of RE and I love it! So mysterious you got my heart pumping. That explosion had to have been loud if they felt it where they were standing. Umbrella sure is a crazy and destructive company indeed.

Atleast William still cares for Annette's well being. Sometimes I question that because of the way things turned out. But even so, he still cares for his G-Virus... probably even more then his own family at the moment.

Poor Barry being used like that. I can see why Wesker picked to use him as a puppet. Barry's a family man... probably something Wesker wanted to be but couldn't have because of the ways things turned out. Wesker sure is ruthless and cruel but something tells me he prefers it that way.

WHAT?! A cliffhanger... oh no not this again, lol. You have gotta update this story soon, please. I want to know who this spy is. I gotta know.

Man you sure took a neat step into the RE universe. Very creative I must say. Keep on keepin on. I certainly am gonna wait for the next chapter. Can't say I like it though, lol. Please update ASAP.

Agent Krivins.
Agent Krivins
2009-05-31 . chapter 2
Oh, Wesker is evil. Just the way I remember him, hehe. If Rebecca did have a gun, Chris certainly would have been a real goner. Then the RE universe would have taken a devestating turn.

Boy, I sure feel it for Wesker. To be betrayed by the person you love like they he was is defenitely gonna crush the heart and soul of even the nicest people. Darn shame. It sure made him cold as ice. The betrayel cause a riple effect. One that ended with the survivors of STARS. They are alot more caring... then again it wasn't love that betrayed them but mearly friendship and trust.

The conversation between Rebecca and Chris certainly brings back memories. A little altered of course but infact made even better. You sure have a good memory to remember those lines.

Alexia Ashford. Graduating at the age of ten is definitely pure genius. Although Wesker is right... she's not like anyone that walks the earth. The very reason she killed her father, Alexander.

Poor Forest. To die the way he did is so sad.

Things certainly picked up in this chapter and can't wait for the next one. I do wonder what plan Wesker gots up his sleave. Anyway, take you time with the update and I'll be there when it is ready to read. You are gifted in this writing and you are doing a wonderful job with using your imagination. Keep on keepin on!

Be Safe,
Brett M.
Agent Krivins
2009-05-31 . chapter 1
It's very good. Even though it's following the same path of the game there is this sense of excitement for me. I find it extremely intriguing that you combine both Jill and Chris' stories from the game. I defenitely would love to see how this continues.

You did incredibly well with the confrontation scene with Wesker and Barry. I like that part very much. So dark and the wording is put correctly. Matches the characters personality.

I'm now off to the next chapter. This is great so far.
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