Review for "Pallet Town: Population, Zero"
10:10am GMT
Thursday, 3 September 2009

Greetings, this is GK Mendoza reviewing!

I am very much impressed! I have read a handful of crossover fics before, but yours has surpassed all those I've read so far by light years! Two thumbs up and a "Double Superb" aren't enough to testify to such a classical work!

I'm quite surprised that you made May and Yolei (whaddya know, their names rhyme) look like pro-wrestling experts! Yolei choking Ash in a sleeper-hold, and May slamming Davis into the ground with a suplex? If May was like this in the real anime, she could've beaten the cheating homosexual Harley to her heart's content, and show Drew that she's a brute in other fields aside from Pokemon Contests! Well, at least, I liked the way you practically put Ash on a golden pedestal with his actions that saved both worlds. Heck, it's not like anyone can risk life and limb everyday and live to tell the tales.

Other than that, my review ends here. More power, and keep up the good work!

good job on another p/d story pete...glad to read every damn chapter of it. so other than the stories you have now, what's next?

Aw, darn. No Ash/Yolei here either.

Oh well. It was still a really good fic and I enjoyed it immensely.

Maybe next time ;)

Sweet fic, so Kari hooks up with Ash and so the Digiworld and Pokeworld are still connected?

That was a good ending :).

I got a good suggestion that you do Pokemon/Rayearth, does that sound fine with you?

Hey, love the story, and I mean REALLY love the story, and I was wondering if you could continue this story, you know bring back some of the other evil Digimon and make a story out of it like this, but keep Ash and Kari the way they are (really good pair up in my opinion) and add more things to the story. You could even put together something that could be pretty kick **, like the Lugia from Shamuti Islands and make Ash part of a new prophecy, or make him one really cool knight or something. But I REALLY hope you continue with this story and keep it alive with this area of crossovers, because I mean seriously Ash and Kari is the greatest crossover pair up I have ever seen, and I have seen a good amount of crossover pair ups.

ah...another cliffhanger eh? anyways, nice action scene in this one. even more dramatic than the one i had with icedevimon in my fic. neways, keep it up man!

I absolutely LOVE the story you have created so far, although I was hoping for Lugia to come out from the ocean and start using his telepathy surprising everyone except Ash and the other Pokemon. But I do hope you include Brock and Misty somewhere in the story. One thing is for sure, I also would like to see you put in some of Ash's old pokemon into the mix, like his Primeape, Butterfree, Lapras, Pidgeot, Haunter, or the Larvitar he was taking care of for a while who somewhere along the line may have turned into a Tyranitar, because I would LOVE to see some old faces to Ash be added into the mix because that would be interesting. But I do have a question though, I have noticed that Ash has only four of his pokemon, so I was wondering if he may have his Sceptile, Totodile, Noctowl, Heracross, Kingler, Squirtle (If they make a stop in Vermillion City), one of his 30 Tauros, Cyndaquil, Swellow, Torkoal, Glalie, Corpish, or even his Donphan with him before hand. However if not then I wouldn't mind seeing one of the ones I said earlier to mae an appearance again because I have always wondered what probably has happened to them once he left them behind or let them go. But I do like how your story is going so far, so I am glad to say that I am adding you to my favorites because your stories are very interesting and I like your writing style that you have. Well I hope hope you consider what I have said and I hope you update the story sometime soon.

I really like this story so far. I've read all your Digimon/Pokemon Crossovers and I've enjoyed them =)

Could this possibly end up as a Yolei/Ash pairing?

Or even just a one-sided crush...?

Always thought they looked good together but I'll read this story either way.

Can't wait to read more

another good chapter there. wow what a tragedy for silver & the mother lugia. i like how you added more stuff about those spheres. keep it up & by the way, i hope u got to take a peak at my latest chapter in my fic.

I really enjoy this story. I had to read a few sentences over in a couple chapters to make sure I knew who was talking. Honestly, I thought that the Digidestined would be more curious about the Pokemon. I'm looking forward to seeing the next chapter.

1:37pm GMT
Tuesday, 14 July 2009

Greetings, this is GK Mendoza reviewing!

So far, this has been a great crossover fic, and fics like these are somewhat rare finds in my opinion. Too bad, I don't know much about the flow of the Digimon story; I have watched only a handful of Digimon 02 episodes a few years ago. Nonetheless, each chapter offers unique and well-timed plot twists that always leave me hanging at the edge of my seat. Since this great fic is not yet complete as of this post, it's in my watch list.

My review ends here. More power, and keep up the good work!

oh hoe! a cliffhanger eh? & the thickens in this one. keep it up pete! & i think its time for me to get back to updating my stuff as well...can't let u & mstrydude hog all the glory of making recent p/d x-over stories.

I don't what Ken is planning to do but what ever it is it can't be good.

That was a good chapter.

I hope you update soon!

Hey nice, here I thought the other digidestined won't be present here but I see TK, Davis and Cody appeared too, and leave it to Davis to jump the gun trying to attack Ash without ask first o.o