It wasn't bad. It was OK. Although I don't really think it added much more to the acctual ending. That's just my opinion, though.

One problem is that the people from "Sealand" wouldn't call it that. It's actually New Zealand, so that's how they'd actually call it. Remember when she was trying to transmit the name to Petra and she was trying to explain the "Z" and David didn't understand and thought that it must be an "S"?

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Excellent! A little choppy in places, but otherwise a satisfying epilogue.

LOL! I'm doing one as well, my English assignment P

I don't think it'll be up yet and it's not actually all ... epiloguey.

ANYWAYS! What region of Canada do you happen to live in?

ALSO! Story was good, had some grammatical errors but was good .

Continue writing.

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