The whole story is absolutely.. great. heart-wrenching.

It's just like Fuebi said.
reading about roxas wanting a major in english.
i almost cried.
and .. axel!

i can't express what i wanted to say. so i'll stop here.
just know, you're awesome and your writing is beautiful.
it's a shame that i hadn't discovered your stories up to now.

WOW.

I loved this. It was beautiful.

Not being able to talk must be hell, poor Roxas. Lucky he's got his Axel, huh?

Keep writing.

~LWD~

AHH
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DKA;JFSDLDKASL;FJSLKDF,

fuck me in the ass, your writing has me in tangles and knots and i can't even see myself from this angle.

where in the world do you find such lovely inspiration? do you get the ideas to write what you do?
i am in awe, i wish i wish i wish i could do this justice but all i can say is that
i'm in awe,
completely and totally,

you should have a thousand million reviews,
for a thousand million talent.

LOVE~

I just read through the other reviews for this story, so I know what I'm about to say is nothing new. Still, I'm shocked that there aren't more people saying the exact same thing.

Your writing is amazing. This story pulled so many different emotions out of me. It's like every single word tugged on my heartstrings a little more.

It's such a unique and heartbreaking idea and you pulled it off perfectly. I'd say MORE than perfectly, but that would just be literately incorrect. :P

Brilliant story- please keep writing.

your writing is amazing. it's really totally completely awesome.

i love how you can make your stories inspiring and sad and beautiful.

don't ever stop.

I was astonished when reading the story..simpLy amazing..you made this story so heartbreaking yet beautifuL..i feel bad for roxas but the way axel understood him made my heart swell with warmth and again, heartbroken..kudos to you.!

I will never, ever be able to explain to you how absolutely amazing you are. Never.

This story is indescribable.

I can't..I don't know.

This kills me.

Ah, my fingers hurt..

YOU:

spew beauty and pain and honesty sprinkled all over with glitter and sunshine and all things monumentally gorgeous. Seriously, I do believe that it's a criminal offense to have this much talent wrapped up in a single person. It is very, very unfair and so on, whatever, I'll sulk later.

Anyways, I'm ignorant of Roxas's speech problem (I thought, "Asperger's!" and then realized it probably wasn't like that) but I did love how Axel understands him regardless. It's special, isn't it, when you can communicate without proper words.

I'm also jellin' becuase of Michele-bell's dedication. She's such a lucky girl.

Hearts,
Icchan

why exactly did he want to burn the house down?
good story though... my gosh, i i cant imagine having that kind of limitation and wanting to get an english major.

Aw, man, your stories always make me tear up...

That was adorable, in a sad sort of way. I'm glad the ending was happy (but I still love how you made us wait for the VERY LAST LINE to know this), because it just works this way.

Your writing is amazing, as always. I wish I could come up with these plots like you do. They're... so beyond words.

I think you have a portion of my soul somewhere in a box in your closet.

All of writing is so amazingly, like... perfect. I just love it, you are by far my favorite writer I have /ever/ read.

That was strangely sweet c:
I love all your original plots!

The last line made my heart plummet into my stomach because this was BEAUTIFUL.

I love how original your plots are. Not only that, but finding out that Roxas wanted to be an English Major almost made me break down in tears.

You inspire me to no end. Really, you're one of my favorite writers. Ever.

hehe. they left.

I love you for your crazy original plots.
And yet you still keep the characters so perfect.
Like, really, I'm envious times a thousand plus two.
Oh, and just so you know, the psychnerd in me is swooning.