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Reviews for: Memories of Grey
Ris Fallon
2009-06-17 . chapter 1
I really adored reading this, and I think you need more reviews :] It's not often something Ken/Kari centric isn't really insanely mushy, slashing, or anything like that. I like how the strength of their relationship was left up to interpretation. They could just be good friends, or they could be more. It was a very subtle line, an art that's been lost amongst fanfiction writers u.u Anyways! I also really loved how you explained where you got some ideas. I knew I'd heard that "joke of the universe" quip before, but as I'm not a Trekkie it was hard for me to place it. Oh, the joy of childhood memories.

And yay, someone who knows the "walking over your grave" reference!! No one I know seems to understand that, so yay :]
KOI Seracus
2009-06-07 . chapter 1
This is probably the most unique look at the Dark Ocean ever. I love the idea of them getting used to it with time. It makes it seem very real and still very dark. Great job.
Potgenie
2009-05-13 . chapter 1
Nice take on a dark-oceanish ken/kari that isn't overly depressing :)
Eliz-chan
2009-05-10 . chapter 1
Amazing work - you should definitely write more for this fandom because your characterization is astounding.
aubreysvampiregirl
2009-05-10 . chapter 1
This was really captivating. So much so, that I feel the need to review and say wow, it's amazing :)
It's serious and in a way cute as well. It's an awesome introspective piece on these two and the darkness and Davis' bubble of light and just...wow.
I loved it :)
NinjaSmashley
2009-05-10 . chapter 1
wonderful work. =)
Glory Nizenea
2009-05-09 . chapter 1
Absolutely stunning. I love the narrative, the way you focus the intrigue on the Dark Ocean, the prickly feeling Ken and Kari get. I also love how they both look at Davis, and Ken says, "Take a wild guess". lol. It was absolutely great. The prose was perfect, not too much but not too little, and the interaction is priceless.

:) Thanks for the read.
ARCtheElite
2009-05-08 . chapter 1
Wow, that was one deep story. Was there a particular inspiration for having Ken and Kari think about the Dark Ocean this way?

I would encourage you to write another story as a sort of "real-time" companion to this. It may be just me, but your story looks as if it could be a really good side-story to another, larger epic.

Thanks for a great story. You pretty much made my day. :D
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