 Ris Fallon 2009-06-17 . chapter 1I really adored reading this, and I think you need more reviews :] It's not often something Ken/Kari centric isn't really insanely mushy, slashing, or anything like that. I like how the strength of their relationship was left up to interpretation. They could just be good friends, or they could be more. It was a very subtle line, an art that's been lost amongst fanfiction writers u.u Anyways! I also really loved how you explained where you got some ideas. I knew I'd heard that "joke of the universe" quip before, but as I'm not a Trekkie it was hard for me to place it. Oh, the joy of childhood memories.
And yay, someone who knows the "walking over your grave" reference!! No one I know seems to understand that, so yay :] |
 KOI Seracus 2009-06-07 . chapter 1 This is probably the most unique look at the Dark Ocean ever. I love the idea of them getting used to it with time. It makes it seem very real and still very dark. Great job. |
 Potgenie 2009-05-13 . chapter 1Nice take on a dark-oceanish ken/kari that isn't overly depressing :) |
 Eliz-chan 2009-05-10 . chapter 1 Amazing work - you should definitely write more for this fandom because your characterization is astounding. |
 aubreysvampiregirl 2009-05-10 . chapter 1This was really captivating. So much so, that I feel the need to review and say wow, it's amazing :)
It's serious and in a way cute as well. It's an awesome introspective piece on these two and the darkness and Davis' bubble of light and just...wow.
I loved it :) |
 NinjaSmashley 2009-05-10 . chapter 1wonderful work. =) |
 Glory Nizenea 2009-05-09 . chapter 1Absolutely stunning. I love the narrative, the way you focus the intrigue on the Dark Ocean, the prickly feeling Ken and Kari get. I also love how they both look at Davis, and Ken says, "Take a wild guess". lol. It was absolutely great. The prose was perfect, not too much but not too little, and the interaction is priceless.
:) Thanks for the read. |
 ARCtheElite 2009-05-08 . chapter 1Wow, that was one deep story. Was there a particular inspiration for having Ken and Kari think about the Dark Ocean this way?
I would encourage you to write another story as a sort of "real-time" companion to this. It may be just me, but your story looks as if it could be a really good side-story to another, larger epic.
Thanks for a great story. You pretty much made my day. :D |