This was a really good story. i loved it.

aw that was so sweet! i love how you didn't make her all girly and what not lol awesome!

I loved how Astoria helped Draco and they both realised there was something going on but Astoria avoided it because of the influence Pansy had over Slytherin. I also liked how Astoria inspired Draco to try and change.

Not a bad one-shot.

You should probably know, though, that her name is Asteria. With an 'e.' An asteria is a kind of flower.

It's a bit funny how JK Rowlings liked to name her female characters after flowers. Lily, Petunia, Asteria, Pansy, and there might have been others . . .

Very cute. Some grammatical errors, but the storyline was adorable. Good job.

Excellent and I liked how you wrote Astoria. Thanks for writing.

nice story..good work

it's actually a pretty good idea. I liked it.

Cute!

Astoria...
Who's Astoria? I don't remember readinganything about her, yet... some people talk about her... Where did she came from? :S
I love Draco, by the way. And your story. It's pretty good!