What a wonderful chapter! I don't like Livvy all that much - Alice is so much nicer! It was stupid of her and (lol corny) she should pay! Lol. Anyway, great chapter (like always) I hope you have a nice relaxing next couple of days!

Wow, so dramatic... really can't wait to see what happens next.

Finally! Yay! I love updates!

Well, this is certainly a predicament, eh? And just when things were going so lovely! I can't wait for the next one! I LOVE this story! Update soon!

Never stop writing! I would not be able to deal with it, if SUCH a great story is not finished. I`m more than curious how this drama is going to be cleared. I always hope for Lily James interaction, but i adore your way not only to write a love story but also a LIFE story with fantastic characters. Keep going. PLEASE

Wow! Great chap! As sad as it is that the Gryffindors lost, the aftermath was by far the most interesting part! I've been rooting for Livvy/Russell since like, the beginning of the story, and I don't think James was being fair by threatening to either break them up or kick one off the team. (Sue me, I'm a sucker for hidden love) Anyway, I can't wait for the next chapter!

Ouch. When you say drama, you really mean drama.

This really made me excited; of course I want Livvy and Russell to be together forever and ever, amen, but they've basically been a ticking time bomb this entire story. So it's almost relief to see their relationship blow up in their faces. And you wrote it really, really well.

That being said, if I were Lily I would be extremely pissed at James (I mean, he pushed her out of the way...not cool). Which I think you also illustrated well. So... yeah. Keep up the excellent work!

ARGH! I CAN'T TAKE THE SUSPENSE!

Get this, I was sitting pathetically praying to God James & Lily's relationship would survive, when I realised...that it NEEDS to survive or Harry Potter would never exist!

You are one seriously talented writer. :D

Keep updating!

OMG..lot´s of drama baby ^^
Livvy and Russel *argh* they made me so angry...this is the great thing about your writing...I always feel like I´m reading a letter from a close friend who´s telling me about his or her life rather than just a story. But there´s one little negative thing about this chapter I have to tell you. I was so disappointed that we didn´t get a look at Alices and Livvys reaction to Lily´s vomiting...this would have been hilarious. I can´t wait until next weeks chapter. Best wishes, Lily

Hilarious! I thought this was really funny! As of the other chapters! good job!

Loved it.

WOW!

SO MUCH DRAMA

I LOVED IT!
I really really hope livvy and russell work out...or screw that
I hope they dont...because my evil readerself knows that drama is more fun than happiness :) (unless we're talking about my life)

so great chappie! Update soon! And I empathize with you --> my homework load is so great that my future is bleak...:(

well update at your convenience! EAGERLY WAITING!

I thought this was extremely good. Awesome characterization, drama (yay!) and I'm literally on the edge of my seat waiting to see what will happen.

Update ASAP please!!

I love me some drama, I gotta say...I'm kinda on James' side for this one. He told them from the beginning...
But I can't wait to see how it concludes.

I was so upset when I read Gryffindor had lost the match! Mad, I know, but I suppose I'm a true Gryffindor! Lol! Anyway, I thought it was great. You keep coming up with some very original ideas. Nobody ever lets Gryffindor lose, because of a kiss... so, I think that's really original. I'm curious to see what the effect of Livvy's and Russell's relationship will be on James' and Lily's. Keep up the great work! And update as soon as possible!

wow thats excellent.

but if the next 3 chapters are gonna be abt this, u rlly need to speed up with updating!!

So u better b careful