aw, old love! so cute. i've only ever read three other stories (which were also slash) in which the characters were old but still in love, so it's a nice (but somewhat rare) thing to find. :3

I felt a piece of me melt at how damned cuddly that was. Literally, there was so much sweetness I almost needed to chug something sour.

But it was so cute.

I can't even say anything else. :D Props to you for writing something so out of the ordinary.

~Galenchia

Great story, so touching! I love your older Rorschach. What is the kinkmeme? Where can I find it?

This was absolutely gorgeous, and honest, and great, especially "Walter isn't certain how it works, but it is new and shiny." :)

Different and realy sweet

So sweet and gentle, without being saccharine. Well done! -ab

I Love it, pretty nice :D

Now I want to read more from those two in this particular point of view.

This story just...I love it so much. It's so in character and just...perfect. Ah. My brain isn't working.

I could so see Daniel loving the Wii and somehow getting Walter to play. And the fact that he still holds his 'The End is Nigh' sign.

Ahh, I have much love for it. Very good job.

This story just melted my heart a little. I've never heard the idea of a story featuring an older Walter and Dan, but the idea is wonderful and you wrote it beautifully. The fact that they are not spry and do not have smooth skin anymore, yet they still harbor that same love is so endearing. And I literally said, "D'aw!" at the little bit about Dan getting a Wii. This is going into my favorites.

Interesting take on them when they're older. They have a very comfortable routine, given all the years spent together. I never thought I'd see the day Rorschach settled down. :)

This story breaks my heart in the best way imaginable. I love you for it. I wish things could actually be like this for them... you did a fantastic job.

Hi, I read this when you first posted in on the kmeme and I just wanted to let you know that it is fabulous. It does amazing, warm, emotional things to my insides.
I think that is strikes just the perfect balance between being realism and sentimentality.
Thank you for sharing this with all of us.

(also- may I say, I am in LOVE with Fracture and the places it is taking all of us!)

Keep writing!

I loved this when I first saw it over on the Kinkmeme. It's so poignant, and even if it's an improbable future for two costumed heroes, it definitely has the feel of a real relationship between two people.