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sara
2009-10-13 . chapter 1
i have never read any fanfic about d that's better please continue
ChilaliSnowbird
2009-10-03 . chapter 1
This... should be good. Oh yes. What is it about D that brings out the sadist in us all?
Tsuki no Rekuen
2009-09-27 . chapter 1
I honestly have to say I didn't think much of this, but you got me wondering what will happen next. I'm ganna feel for D, taking care of kids is ganna make you not only respect your parents more for what they did but view childern as nothing but dreadful life sucking monsters.. or is that just my opinion?

I hope to see more from this if you plan or are able to continue. You left it off at a nice cliff hanger.
randomgirl
2009-08-17 . chapter 1
Hm. This looks interesting. I admit, this is looking better than I thought it would. I hope you continue this story soon!
Ne'ith5
2009-07-18 . chapter 1
Interesting baby and D? More please!
pinkrollingstone
2009-05-29 . chapter 1
Great! Cant wait to see more.
poefreak
2009-05-13 . chapter 1
o! please continue it sounds good already update soon!
p.s.Pancake
2009-05-12 . chapter 1
Update soon! I really like it.
Maybe, if you're looking for any possible improvement on this chapter, you could put a bit more into when D arrives (it's a bit like he just came out of the blue), but it's fine the way it is, to me.
Is it going to explain what kind of witchcraft she practiced, if at all?
Anyway, it sounds like it's going to be funny and good, and I certainly look forward to reading the rest.
tanith-4486
2009-05-12 . chapter 1
gee, this is an interesting begining.
Female Heero Yuy
2009-05-09 . chapter 1
OMG YOU HAVE TO UPDATE THIS!
Slinky-and-the-BloodyWands
2009-05-08 . chapter 1
Indeed, it will be. I love that LH had the last line. That was beautifully written and reminded me deeply of the novels. Nicely done. I can't wait for this adventure to unfold. I wonder if D can juggle babies...probably can. The gorgeous youth can do anything, after all :) Wonderful!
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