i have never read any fanfic about d that's better please continue

This... should be good. Oh yes. What is it about D that brings out the sadist in us all?

I honestly have to say I didn't think much of this, but you got me wondering what will happen next. I'm ganna feel for D, taking care of kids is ganna make you not only respect your parents more for what they did but view childern as nothing but dreadful life sucking monsters.. or is that just my opinion?

I hope to see more from this if you plan or are able to continue. You left it off at a nice cliff hanger.

Hm. This looks interesting. I admit, this is looking better than I thought it would. I hope you continue this story soon!

Interesting baby and D? More please!

Great! Cant wait to see more.

o! please continue it sounds good already update soon!

Update soon! I really like it.
Maybe, if you're looking for any possible improvement on this chapter, you could put a bit more into when D arrives (it's a bit like he just came out of the blue), but it's fine the way it is, to me.
Is it going to explain what kind of witchcraft she practiced, if at all?
Anyway, it sounds like it's going to be funny and good, and I certainly look forward to reading the rest.

gee, this is an interesting begining.

OMG YOU HAVE TO UPDATE THIS!

Indeed, it will be. I love that LH had the last line. That was beautifully written and reminded me deeply of the novels. Nicely done. I can't wait for this adventure to unfold. I wonder if D can juggle babies...probably can. The gorgeous youth can do anything, after all :) Wonderful!