please please please please please please please please please make more chapters

I already reveiwed this chapter, but since I wasn't logged in FF doesn't seem to recognize that. I hope you haven't given up on this story - I'd still like to see how Scourge and Blackheart's relationship unfolds.

Aw...poor Scourge. :( I thought you did pretty good keeping him in character, to be honest. So are Bone and Brick supposed to be in a romantic relationship or just friends? I wasn't sure... I think Scourge and Blackheart's relationship is turning out to be really sweet, though. I had my doubts, but you really seem to be pulling it off perfectly. As always, keep writing and I'll keep reading! :) Good luck!

This was a good chapter, though short. I think it makes sense for Scourge to feel something first, and for Blackheart to initially not really know what's going on with him. Just seems like the story might flow more that way, though it's just a suggestion. I'll be awaiting the next update [and trying to think of any more suggestions!]

This is an amazing story, I love it. I like how you are giving Scrouge a chance to rule, but as a true leader, not one that leads just by fear. And your character Blackheart, is wise and strong. I wouldn't quite call him noble, but how can you truly be, while living in Twolegplace? Anyway, I await the next chapter.

Don't worry about the writer's block, it happens to everyone. Just keep going and eventually you'll get back into the swing of things. I didn't think you were out of it with this chapter at all, your chapters just keep getting better and this one was no exception! I think the plot is really starting to come together. Keep writing!

Ooh, I like Blackheart's ideas. He and Scourge make great leaders together; when one runs out of ideas, the other has some. As for tips for making it more romantic, Blackheart's Twoleg plan might bring up some opportunities, but I can't be sure yet. It all depends on where you take the idea.

[Sorry...that last part was pretty unhelpful xD. Hopefully next chapter I'll have something more to useful].

I LIKE IT.
THE WHOLE GAY THING IS STRNGE, BUT I'M USED TO IT SO WRITE MORE PLEASE!!

Awesome! I loved this chapter! Poor Blackheart. I hope he's going to be okay. Although I have to admit, I still love Scourge. But Blackheart is definately growing on me. Will he ever see Anna again? I can't wait for the next chapter. Keep writing and I'll keep reading! Good luck!

I like how Scourge and Blackheart are interacting. Sort of like friends, but they still seem like they don't fully trust each other. And I like how you had Scourge and Blackheart sharing a meal; Scourge doesn't seem like the cat to offer his food to just anyone. This is quite good so far.

awesome! except fo rth enuzzling part where it looks like they are g. a. y.

OOH! I almost forgot about warriors. This was good. I liked it a lot. You really got the WArriors Vibe.

update!

Nice job - you wrote Scourge very in-character.
Can't wait for the next chapter =D Update soon!

This is pretty good! I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
I like the last sentence - 'I'll make the stones themselves bleed'. Did that have any reference to StoneClan or am I just reading into it too much? xD
Update quickly!