hey! your story is great! I love it! Just one doubt though, you said Harry and Severus' honeymoon was in Brazil, but then you said they went to Africa and Brazil is in South America, so where did they go? Brazil or Africa?

loved it

This was a very good story also waiting for the next story

Aw... I ,loved it!

i loved this

A nice ending, it is nice to see that the rest of the weasley's came around.

very very nice
post soon

Umm, I'm writing a correction to a review I posted a minute or two ago. "Seriously now, you need to go back and re-read your entire story for errors, because there many and some of them are just letters left out of simple words." I meant to write: because there are many and blah, blah, blah. I would have re-read what I wrote, but by the time I finished writing the review, I was so saddened by what I wrote about your story and its mistakes I didn't want to face it again; your story just let me down by the end. I still went back and re-read it, though, because I was bugged by not checking it before I posted it.

I also neglected to mention that your writing style was just rather unappealing to me. By the end of the story, I was basically skimming for new information because something in the way it was written just made it feel like it wasn't written as a true story. I can't really explain my feelings about that right now--something my English 124 teacher would complain at me about--but something just feels off.

Wow, I really didn't mean for this to become part two of my review, but I'm not sorry.

It had to be said,

Mizu.

Well, I read your story and I have to ask: Is everyone pregnant? I mean, holy crap, towards the end being pregnant became all the rage and the wish for "pink" appeared in almost every other chapter. Seriously now, you need to go back and re-read your entire story for errors, because there many and some of them are just letters left out of simple words. Probably from typing too fast, but also something that could have been fixed simply by slowly read what you wrote right after you typed it. Oh, and use more commas. I really don't know why using less commas has become fashionable in stories, but they're needed and I want them. So use them.

I feel like I keep writing the same things, nowadays.

Epic sigh,

Mizu.

Great story!! Lovely naming tradition! Thanks for sharing!

loved the story very cute

I'm enjoying the story. But found one inconsistancy. They went to Brazil for their honeymoon, not Africa.

nice story.. Well done.. :) perhaps draco/ harry.. :)or harry/oc

Aww...they got the little girl!! Feel kind of sorry for her though...she'll have four very protective guys around her at all times. Not to mention all of her other family members!! But very cute none the less.

As for another story how about Ron/Harry mpreg. Where Ron's pregnant and he finds out right before the final battle but doesn't tell Harry for fear that he'll get too distracted. ron of course fights deciding that he's not lying down while his loved ones go out and fight. then maybe harry looses his memory and doesn't know about their relationship. And maybe he thinks that he's in a relationship with someone else and how Ron has to remind him that they're together.

or could be that it's after the final battle and Herms helps the boys cover it up by pretending that she and Ron are marrying and she's the one that pregnant. maybe somehow it gets out to the papers and yeah

Okay I love this story and I have a challenge for you to...

If you want to do something that hasn't been done before then may I suggest a Harry/Cormac link up during their school yearss... or a Harry/Blaise maybe...

Anyway it goes for your next story, I will read it, I really enjoyed this story, the only bad part about it, was that it ended, I wanted more.