 Alexi 7/26/09 . chapter 1 ooh I likey! Very lovely. Who did she love and lose and why did he sneer and cry? |
 something-like-love 1/1/07 . chapter 1that was wonderul! I really liked it... |
 whitehound 5/13/06 . chapter 1It's a lovely poem (even though it places Hogwarts int he wrong country!) - I've put it on my links pages, with a star. |
 c.g 8/19/03 . chapter 1 Wonderful writing. The story itself is also very good.
er...can't think of anything else to say, really. |
 Magpie Poet 3/3/03 . chapter 1at first i thought this was going to be a sorting hat type of poem, but it went much deeper. i like the end, and especially the line about sneering all day and crying all night. just beautiful. :) sorry, i really like it, but don't have particularly constuctive criticism. all the same there was no way i couldn't stop and comment. |
 Persephone Kore 11/27/02 . chapter 1Joannie! I don't remember ever seeing this before, but it's... warm and wistful and sweet and a little sad, and it makes me want to read more about the Founders as pictured here, but then, that would take away the whole point of what grew in the legends and what was lost... |
 Sarah 7/11/02 . chapter 1 Wow, that was really good. *-* I really liked your take on the founders. :D |
 Miran 2/22/02 . chapter 1Oh I really enjoyed reading 'They were four'!
That's the kind of imaginative poetry I like, so please continue writing -or as I like to quote:
-keep the flame!-
I am looking forward for more of your stories. |
 Serpentina 1/3/02 . chapter 1That was wonderful. It caused the little hairs at the back of my neck to stand on end. |
 Noodlejelly 12/24/01 . chapter 1really good, very interesting ideas |