 FireAndPowder 1/21/12 . chapter 12AMAZING STORY! I looooooved it! :) aww a psycho Matt scared me especially when he teamed up with Light lol Kira Kingdom *shudders at the thought* I neeeeed an epilogue! or maybe a sequel . I just need to know what happens once they're all healed and what about their relationship with Matt and Light and does Near survive his sickness? **Dies inside at the thought of Near not getting better** OKAYS that's it for my review Thanks for the great story! |
 andysanime 7/22/11 . chapter 12Really good job on this story! |
 SarySoda 4/9/11 . chapter 12OMG SQUEEEE
a few chapters ago i actually thought you were gonna kill them and i was like 'you bitch' LOL |
 SarySoda 4/9/11 . chapter 4This is so funny and cute :)
i love your stories! |
 CrayolaNostalgia.x 11/1/10 . chapter 12That was one of the best stories I have ever read here in the site.
I cried when I was reading chapter 11. Up until chapter 12. (:
At first, I thought that this was just going to be some one chapter lemon fic, but as I started reading, my whole look on this story had changed. I wish you could write even more stories. I'm sure you'll be a successful author one day. ;)
In short, I just absolutely loved it. :x |
 Fairylust 9/22/10 . chapter 9U not fail!
Oh, and I do! |
 Fairylust 9/22/10 . chapter 8How can Geivanni have fans? All he did was follow Near's orders! Anyway I luv dis story adn how it's going! Great work! Luv your work! 3 :D
Hope ya have your other stories updated soon!
*Wink*
*Wink*
Lol
Don't even know why I did that!
;P |
 KanomeUchiha 8/9/10 . chapter 12I have finally completed my quest. I have read every single one of your fanfics and loved them all to no end. The way you convey emotion into each of your stories is simply amazing to say the least. Please keep your spirits up and stay true to yourself in everything you do. And thank you for all these amazing stories. |
 Kanome Uchiha 8/9/10 . chapter 9 Oh god i had that happen to me too once. it was a naruto rp with a friend and i was wearing my sasuke shirt. i got that same vibe and took it off chucking at my tv. and then my posters started giving me the creeps so i went into my closet. The scariest part is that when it was time for food and i opened my closet door the shirt was right in front of me and no one had been in my room at all. Creepy huh? oh yeah, I LOVE THIS FIC! |
 Tara 6/14/10 . chapter 1 (Oops, the last comment is from me, sorry) |
 anon 6/14/10 . chapter 12 One of the best fanfics i've ever read...and that's saying something! I loved it! And to be honist, it was even better the 8th time!
WTG! XD |
 bunnyboolikesoreos 4/16/10 . chapter 12Since I only read completed stories, I just HAD to wait until the end until I reviewed.
I liked how it was like an alternate reality, and how many twists and turns it had! Such as Matt being in love with Mello, and all the alternate parings and stuff. Oh, and how everyone was royalty! But one thing that bothered me, was we(the readers and myself) Near seemed a little...undeveloped? Maybe, something like that at least. Just because of lack of past, the only thing I really knew was he was obviously abused, because of his...occupation? I guess you could call it that. And how you, incorporated some of the other characteristics of characters, like Mello's scar, and Light and Matt looking the same. I read a comic strip about that too. xD But Near almost died twice, and Mello got hurt, and almost died, which resulted in getting scared. But I loved how you let their relationship bloom and not just skip to the fuc- I mean, lemony goodness xD
PS: I loved it!
PPS: I felt blonde when you said 'gothic K's' I was like wtf? And it was Light's kingdom, and I myself when you were like, 'Kira's Kingdom' like duh! xD
PPS: You thought you were a horrible author? Well missy throw that thought how the window! Look at all these awesome reviews!
PS: I know how you feel about having a character watch you, I was writing a story, but in addition to my friend's eyes, my poster were watching too xD
Me(Duh! xD) |
 The Black Tulip 3/27/10 . chapter 12ow! I just.. LOVE IT! but... Matt was a great friend.. why! whie! *scream to the air* well, Is not important, the important thing is that, Mello have his smexy Scar of his *drools* Oh geez, m'really enjoy all of your stories, so, read ya!
PS: wassup with B and L? xD |
 Smile-Evily 12/6/09 . chapter 12IM so glad that they got together! The sex was awesome! |
 wolfrain1994 11/8/09 . chapter 12that was so f-ed up! i mean i cried least 3x!and the m/m, m/n etc...i will love this story 4 all time...that is my fav twisted melloxnear/love story ever |