Heya, Nicole here again, with some more good ol' con crit. :-)
Ok... song fics are a bitch to pull off properly. I had to read thru the script format (which, again, I find rather bothersome to read thru), then stop again and read several lines of songs lyrics. I found that rather jarring. Then... well, I like the aforementioned songs by themselves just fine, some pple find that they can't picture certain chars belting out pop/r&b songs. In this case, Colleen singing kinda weirded me out, I admit. Check out for more ideas of song fics.
Blades' quotes... eh, they're kinda iffy to me. If you want, I could google up some authentic Japanese quotes for ya to use or something. :-)
Good stuff - I am the queen of pairings. I like canon pairings (Inuyasha/Kagome, Goliath/Elisa), and Hunter/Colleen are my OTP. As someone who hates it when 'one twu wuvs' are thrown convienently together and they have perfect relationships (it's alright sometimes - just unrealistic when it's done ALL the time), I love it how you never really resolve the romantic tension between them in this, that you save it for another story (at least, I *think* that's what you have in mind). I also like Wise/Skater.
*whew* Hoped that helped. :-)

This was a...interesting story. Good, though. You really could picture the characters oing this or saying that.

Wow! Long, but WELL worth it. A lot of these vignettes had all the right emotions at all the right times. Superb job on a fic based on a series that, in my humble and honest opinion, was cancelled QUITE unfairly.