Whoa, my first SessKag in years! (: This is really good!

I must say that the story was very good (I love a uncontrolled Sesshoumaru XD) so I liked it very much.I think Naraku was little OOC,than again he is crazy so...who knows :D
Ohh you have to continue this in all cost :)
love ^^

I enjoyed your story, it was well written.

Excellent story as always...

sweet one shot

I liked this fanfic and hope that more chapters will be added. Thanks for the good read.

this is a really great story
pleae write the second chapter soon

What happens next?

Why do you always end in cliffies? You make a one-shot, make it seem like a regular ending and then BAM! You twist it around and end it there! WHY ARE YOU SO CRUEL!!? Screw naraku and his evil plans! You are the true evil mastermind!

is this the end by the last sentence its not well at least i hope its not keep up the good work ^_^

im sorry for your loss...as far as ooc goes u did a very good job at not writing them...skewed i guess i need to say. i look forward to more updates though in the meantime im gonna head over and check out some of ur other fics...im sorry again and may the sun shine always at your back...yeah

Well, that was a wonderful beginning. Can you keep going with it? It was fantastic!
As always, I love your writings!
Cheers!
~Talapadme

Sorry about your losses, seems they always come in three's. Creativity is the best way to get through emo pain. Give birth to something as immortal as your stories, they stay no matter what. Anyway , I love the way you write . Good writing ishard to come by, keep up the excellent work. I'll be craving more lines from you.

I think you did quite well characterizing the two of them. I rather liked how you started it out as well, what with Kagome ignoring Naraku. If you ever write more, I'll be sure to read it.

so Naraku's plan isn't over. what is it ? and will you write a next chapter ? or a sequel ?

please... (chibi eyes)