|Reviews for Death's Dominion|
| lucyferr 10/18/09 . chapter 11
Severus understood that the Headmaster thought to avert the effect of the Vow by dying early, before Draco could be presented with his task
ah so dat be how dat happened...
| lucyferr 10/18/09 . chapter 8
Is Crouch Albus in disguise?
| lucyferr 10/18/09 . chapter 6
“And who would seriously believe such a thing, Albus? Children and madmen!”
“Which is our audience, Severus. Unless you have changed your opinion of the Dark Lord’s sanity and Harry’s maturity.”
And millions of Muggles willing to accept as gospel the ravings of one Weasel-addicted Scot.
| lucyferr 10/18/09 . chapter 5
Harry's stupidity truly does know no bounds.
| lucyferr 10/17/09 . chapter 2
i likes the Shed-Stop Potion
| lucyferr 10/17/09 . chapter 1
What had finally made her leave their company, though, was the sudden desire for her to yell at Harry and tell him that if it was anyone’s fault but Voldemort’s that his godfather had died, then it was his fault.
I wish more authors, especially the Harry fans, would realize this.
| irm63 9/19/09 . chapter 34
I finished and I solemnly swear to found the MMADfanFanclub, better known as MMADfFC and and being the first member of the MMADfFC. ;-)
I enjoyed the plot,and the plots within the plot, woven like a spiderweb between the chapters, catching the readers.
A very long story without lenghts.
| irm63 9/13/09 . chapter 21
'Death's Dominion' is a wonderfull, well written piece of art.
Thank you for writing such an fascinating story.
| Smithereens 8/12/09 . chapter 34
Hooray! Great ending. Creative way to work around the Vow too.
I was hoping for a tad more Severus/Hermione fluff, but it honestly would have looked out of place. So I guess I can deal with it.
Loved it, thanks for writing.
| dragonfolder 8/11/09 . chapter 34
I really loved this fic - I enjoyed the depth of the story and the vivid descriptions of Snape's experiences. I rarelt cry when reading, but the last chapter moved me to tears. I want to say thank you for a wonderful experience. :)
Yours sincerely Ben.
| Smithereens 8/10/09 . chapter 28
I'm excited to find out just what the crap is really going on Crouch. Your hints are just vague enough that I find myself trying to read too quickly so I can figure it out, and then I have to go back through and reread parts so I don't skip anything.
I know you haven't gotten to Dumbledore's "death" on purpose, but I'm getting anxious for the explanation.
Hooray for Severus getting to tell off the toe-rag!
| Smithereens 8/10/09 . chapter 24
I'm really enjoying your story so far. Though I don't usually like when authors put their own prophecies in, I'm still very anxious to see where this goes.
I do like how it's very easy to follow your time line, even during the points where it shifts every other chapter. I did notice you put dates at the beginning of some chapters, but it's a bad habit of mine to skip over anything that isn't part of the story. Even doing that I was never confused.
Another plus is that it's finished and completely posted, so the only reason I have to wait to see what happens is that I need to eat and sleep sometimes!
Already great enough to be favorited, thank you for posting this.
| Elsa 8/9/09 . chapter 34
Aww, it's the end.
I loved Snape's view on that part of the ceremony.
It's so awesome of him to visit Hermoine, and yay Hermoine for her advice and just her presence.
I hope Snape will be able to find something else, and sort out his thoughts in the end.
Thanks for posting this story on ffnet! 3
| zule bean 8/6/09 . chapter 34
Sigh...I hated to open up this chapter, knowing that it would be the last. Thanks for the wonderful story.
| Hogwarts Duo 8/6/09 . chapter 34
I'm so sad to see this story end but I have a feeling there's more in the RaM universe that's begging to be written. If you should ever need ideas, I have a few dozen for RaM-ADMM stories. I know you're shocked.
I thoroughly enjoyed the epilogue. It was nice to see the ceremony from Snape's point of view when Albus gave him the medal. aw.
The bit on the bus on the way to Hermione's was exactly like something that would happen on just an ordinary day and is one more reason why your stories are so popular. It's the little attention to details that makes them more realistic and enjoyable.
I'm glad he decided to stay for a year and then decide. I think Hermione was right. He can stay and then when and if he leaves it will be on his own terms. And it leaves the story at a nice place, leaving us wondering (sorta) how things worked out.
All in all... another brilliant story! Thanks for writing it and sharing it with us.