 heidi-mayer87 2009-05-10 . chapter 1Wow. That was really intense. And the way you portrayed Tsuna's insecurities about being accepted not for his own sake, but because Gokudera would always, always accept him was great, too.
And Gokudera's attitude to his life - really, I can hardly imagine a more precise description. And the words "he has no thread tying Gokudera-kun to him, dragging him back like it does others" just broke my heart a little.
I think there was a typo in the sentence "He wants him to light up in love and happiness, but he's sacred that he'll be loved out of duty and gratefulness" - was it "scared" instead of "sacred"?
It was a wonderful piece of character's insight, and Tsuna's relationship with Gokudera. It even made me wonder if Tsuna would have made a good school nurse (lol, imagined him taking kids' measurements and giving them lolipops after). Anyway, this goes straight to my favourites. ^_^ |