That was awesome, I could really feel what Yusei was feeling, I'm literally crying right now as I'm typing this.

It's perfect. 3

This story was impressive. You capture emotions very well, and the scene was described beautifully. You have everyone in character, too, methinks. The story really lets you delve into the grief of the moment. Good job.

I love Kiryu and Yusei fics, and you really did them justice in my opinion! Your writing style is beautiful and you set the tone really well. You should keep writing! *faves*

Dang I can't spell anguish.

Wow. Just wow. I loved the way you described it. The pain and aunguish. Plus the ending was really good. I can't end my stories but you did really good.