This is an excellent story. I quite like it. I always did suspect Kim and Shego had some 'thing' going on between them. And Shego was one of the most interesting characters in the series, probably being the most developed one. Also, I can see all that you're writing about happening, in a sense. What I mean is, it makes sense in it's own way,a nd is not absurd.
As it is, the only thing to lament is that it hasn't been updated in some time. Still, I'm sure you'll update it soo, and when you do, I'll write a full review on the chapter, rather than just general thoughts on the story. Until that time, then.

great job. update soon

This is an awesome chapter, you guys are awesome. When will there be more!

Wow a building full a Dommes, Awesomeness!

Oh, gods... I'll have to finish reading what's up yet of this tomorrow evening, but just know that I have THOROUGHLY enjoyed it up to now, I do very much plan to continue reading it in the future.

I love it! How you have Tara's fighting abilities, Hope's language skills, Bonnie's quick thinking, and Will Du's confusion. this chapter is AWSOMELY AMAZING!

wow good chapter! i couldn't stop laughing a couple times there =)

I love the chapter, and can't wait for more.
-Kate

Very nice fight scene, interesting team dynamic, for sure.

Love the chapter, a few things that needed to be straightened out were so yey them.
-Kate
Update

Nice.
-Kate

That, was EXTREMELY HOT! Great job!

wow... nice ;)

Horny Kim! Hahahaha.

continue