I thought I already reviewed this but now can't find mine among the hundreds(!) of reviews. :) Wonderful story! (got a bit sniffly at Spock's little cousin asking him if he "lost his mommy") Looking forward to your next work. Thanks for sharing! :)

this is great. i love it. haven't seen the movie yet, though. some things went a bit to fast but otherwise, great!

WOW great story, enjoyed it all, keep up the great work in your writing.

“Spock, it was a joke. You take everything so seriously. Vulcan women may be rational, but we earth women are known for being irrational. Especially when our hormones get involved.”

Please don't say this. It is offensive and degrading to women to assume that the only time they become upset is when they are on their periods. Moreover, it is illogical to think this and also think that when men get upset it is for legitimate reasons.

Otherwise, nice story. That is all.

This is great. I only have a glitch here:
Spock: "“I want to scream and shout and, and kill somebody, and cry. But I must keep control of my emotions.” "

I don't think that Spock had reached the point where he realised what he felt by this time... even with the alternative scenario which involved Uhura. He was keeping everything down, and he could not even name his emotions until he beat Kirk to pulp.

Just my two cents. Otherwise, it's great.

I LOVE that scene where Uhura entered the turbo lift and kissed Spock! In fact I was SO surprised. And so sad and mad when Vulcan was destroyed along with Amanda Grayson. Quinto's expressions were amazing. Shock and thickly veiled anger... and sadness. Just amazing.

Lovely. I wish that Uhura truly knew Amanda Grayson before she was killed in Vulcan... sigh...

You did well with Uhura, and also Spock. Although you have got Spock, I might be able to give you a hint for Spocks' speech pattern: try to write in British style. If you watch the Batman movies or read Batman comics, you will know how Alfred Pennyworth speaks. Their pattern is very much like Vulcans. Long and elaborated. They have dry sense of humour too, sometimes :-D

Love it so much! Spock and Uhura are just so cute. And you capture their characters perfectly, kudos!

This has been such a fun ride! Thanks for sharing it.

aww *sniff* such fluff

fantastic ending to a fantastic story great work look forward to more of your stories

awsome!

awsome chapter,update soon,please!

Excellent story. I can't wait to read more on this. You've written it so well. I thoroughly enjoyed it. Amazing