Wow... I would never have thought that Harry and Sarah were brother and sister. That was rather unexpected. And, aside from the minor punctuation mistakes, I think you did an ok job on this story. Especially the last chapter. Very funny. Thanks for the good read.

OK, are you seriously only in 9th grade? You write very well, i hope you plan o become a writter. I would even try to see if you could write a book based on the movie Labyrinth, then you would own the rights and could write a sequel. All you would havet o do is get permission from jim hensson productions, after you get your college degree and all. So start writting, add more detail than the movie shows, and you can have both books ready to turn in after you get the permission.

this was great. i LOVED it. i'm mostly commenting now because im a new member and i dont know how to fave/subscribe without doing so, because im at a loss for words at this. it's just...great.

*swings in from nowhere on ceiling* Oh, look, here's a chapter I didn't review yet, so...

I LOVE IT!

oh... It appears I've already reviewed chapter three... So here's chapter four! *grins* LOVE IT!

LOVE IT! Don't hate me, please?

Your an awesome writer. Please don't kill me for this...

lovew it. love it. ;love it love it love it love it love it love it love it love it. Do you get that I love this story? Cause I love it...

Lol at the ending XD

I really loved the storyline and there were a lot of scenes that had me laughing so hard I was getting strange looks from the people around me... Mainly, my mother lol

I hate to put a dampener on my review, but I suggest proof-reading, or maybe getting a beta. There were multiple mistakes and, although none were too important, it would have been more enjoyable to read if I didn't keep picking them out.

You more torture devices for this <3, and maybe some doughnuts too lol

I'm off, I might go read The Heir :)

XoXoX
Kuroibara Kitty

omgomgomg!! please tell me where you got the butt whistling part. if it was Jeff Dunham, i think im gonna hurt myself falling offa my bed.

LOL!
Brava!
I loved it!
I wish there was an after story of her life in the labyrinth and her using her wand...
FABULOUS!
WRITE ON MY DEAR! Of course in other stories

HE TREATED HER LIKE A ONE NIGHT STAND!
Sorry but that just isn't right...

Congrats on a story completed!

BlackRose

Hot damn!! Dear lord that was funny! I can't wait to see what happens next!

BlackRose

OH MY GOSH I LOVED THIS FIC! *hands over every chocolate substance known to man with Jareth sitting right on top of the heap* This is definitly one of the best Labyrinth fics/crossovers i have ever read!