 Tatsumaki-sama 2009-06-02 . chapter 1This was great! I loved the interactions between Dean, Sam and Castiel. Especially Castiel's curiosity and child-like wonder as he observed Dean and Sam and the other human things that he didn't understand. It was so cute of them to take care and look after Castiel as he went into shock, even snuggling up with him in the bed to keep him warm. The whole scene where Dean helps Castiel put on his tie and his shoes was definitely the most heartwarming scene ever. Dean thinking about Castiel's wings and sensing that they could be right there in front of him also brought some shivers to me.
// “You’re not gonna lecture me on the evils of drink, then?”
Castiel frowned, completely puzzled. “Do you want me to?”//
//The only problem was that Cas was still sitting propped up at the foot of Dean’s bed, head thrown back, and Dean felt awkward at the idea of lying down with his feet near an angel’s face. Not to mention that it was probably disrespectful, and that seemed like a touchy subjects with the angels.//
//“I’m not stripping him down to his underwear,” he said finally.//
//Dean, slightly embarrassed and hoping Castiel hadn’t taken them for two idiots (or perverts, or sinners, or whatever an angel might infer from three grown men cuddling up on one relatively small bed)//
//Looked like they were going to live to be smited another day, after all.//
//Maybe it was just his imagination playing on him, but he wondered where the wings were, and if somehow Dean was sensing them, because he was getting the sort of supernatural vibe that a life-time as a hunter had taught him to notice.//
//I taught an angel how to do knots, Dean thought//
//He’d been leaning against the counter, something he didn’t usually do, did that mean anything?//
I just loved all of these quotes and lines. Especially the line with Castiel leaning against the counter. It was something I never noticed before and it fit in nicely with your story. Great job! |