This wasamazing and made me smile like insanely...you're amazing and the story was as well.

Aww! Really loved this story.

It's your fault! It's your fault that whenever I read your stories I make this little noises and stuf whenever something exiting/unexpected/fun/whatever happens xD
This chapter was the worst for me, really. The moment Jamie started undressing, my mother looked at me with this 'you are doing it again'-look, so I know that SOME kind of sound came out of my mound.

Of course I liked it. I mean, they are both hot, they are both funny without realizing it, AND they are both half-naked.

You, are a genious.

LOVE IT!

i love this! its SOO cute!!

*smiles* I got a little nervous around "heart to heart" but you pulled it off beautifully. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Really, Jamie should know it's not a obvious choice.

Ps. Looking forward to next one! Loving the chapter-a-day thing!

Aw! Poor Jamie! And he's trying so hard!

great! loveit! whats the last word? how do you pronounce it?Write soon!

Aww! This is too cute

Pyro is self consious! lol I'd never have expected that xD

I'm sure Mulitple Man will...boost his confidence though :D

So glad this is being updated daily; can't wait for the next installment :)

*laughs* I like this story more and more. Can't wait for the first lesson!

"The fire mutant scowled, pulling his legs up to his chest defensively. "

When I read that, my first thought was 'Aw... Cute!'

Anyway, like always, I really liked it. It's amazing that you can write something that isn't really long, but still is really well written =)

oh noes! Pyro can't swim! Teach him Multiple Man! Teach him! lol

Can't wait for next chapter! ^-^

It's me again! Prepare yourself for yet another sensless review...

I know i shouldnt be so amused that Pyro nearly drowned but i can't help myself! I found the idea very entertaining...especially Jamie being such a pervert-i have to say it suits him

This chapter was great...I wonder if Multiple Man will ever suceed in getting Pyro to go skinny-dipping? I bloody hope so! xD

Anyway; I'm off to create a profile and attempt to read one of your longer fics...will probably take me years though! xD

The English Raspberry

Aww, poor John ^^ He can't swim, can he?
As always, I love how you write Jamie, and the way he and John act towards and around eachother. And I really love how fast you updated =D