Hmm...

Well, apart from the shortness and the fact that China (where I am currently residing) blocked the page with one of the chapters), it was a cute fic. However, next time, please don't link to other pages, it's really annoying, post them here, and if there are certain scenes that should not be there, edit them out for a chapter here and post the full chapter somewhere else. Just giving this to you as an advice for future stories, as it kind of ticked me off.

But don't feel down, I was amazed how well you managed to capture the characters as they appear in the story, well... maybe apart from Olette, but oh well... really well done, and like I said, it's a cute story.

wouldn't find it?

Chapter Nine...I was like...mag eending na?

Chapter Ten...boy, Lexi sure know how to make a grand exit. )

Love It!

o, Olette is gonna get pissed

i love how you use actual facts from the game.

update soon!

crazy stuff, loved it though

Great work! Update son!1

COOL!

This could be fun! Update soon!