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Reviews for: The Forbidden Fruit
bathpinkdog 8/23/10 . chapter 1
love this(:

it was too cute, but heartbreaking D:
LionsLady11-09-70 5/15/09 . chapter 1
Too cute!

I loved how you did this

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TJ Sparkles 5/11/09 . chapter 1
I absolutely loved it!

Very interesting pairing...one that I've never thought of before, to tell you the truth. But it definitely fit, especially with the Adam and Eve reference. That's also something different, and I love how you were able to turn this into a oneshot.

Oh, I wanted them to be able to be together so badly. It's a shame that they couldn't :(

Awesome work, Christal!

Tina
SkyeEyes16 5/10/09 . chapter 1
That is a rather strange pairing. I would have never imagined those two together.
Relly-Cody-forever 5/10/09 . chapter 1
Aww I love it Christal!

You made Edge so likable! lol

And cute idea, to think of the biblical names!

Loved it!
x.rustyhalo 5/10/09 . chapter 1
Wow. This was SUCH a fun read. (:

So upsetting that Eve and Adam couldn't be together.

If you continued this story, I'm sure it would turn out

awesome and a sequel later would be great. I'd love it

SO much Christal. Great job, girly!
mikkithemizfit 5/10/09 . chapter 1
This is SO much awesomeness, girly.

Seriously .. I mean, I liked the pairing before, but I'm falling for them now :D

Poor Eve!

Poor Adam!

(Yay for Jeria :P)

You know, the bible reference did come to mind before but I never really paid much attention to it.

Adding to faves!

And, btw, I'm totally starting on that Edge/Eve vid I was telling you about soon :P
jojocheer28 5/10/09 . chapter 1
This is definitely the best one shot I've ever read! I never thought of Eve/Adam as a couple but I kind of like it.

If you write a sequel I'll make sure to read it :D

Awesome story!
RKO.I.F 5/10/09 . chapter 1
YAY! I loved this! To tell you the truth I don't even know the Adam and Eve story, lol. But I loved this Adam and Eve story ;]! Great one shot!
MonkeysUncle 5/10/09 . chapter 1
Oh! Adam and Eve. I've never thought of them as a pairing before, but i can see it.

Please do a sequel, I'm a patient person :)
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