|Reviews for Admiration|
| Cookie-the-Rookie 4/21/13 . chapter 42
The story was great, but there were too many grammatical errors.
| tsukinopen 3/21/13 . chapter 17
wow he was third seat
| TogetherForever1 3/3/13 . chapter 42
I loved this! I think I will have to write a story on Isshin and Toshiro. It will most likely be a one or two shot. I am inspired. Very wonderful story!
| sain-kookie 1/15/13 . chapter 21
I just realized you refer to Kaien as Atsuo at one point in here. Other than that I enjoy your story :)
| Guest 1/5/13 . chapter 7
Do you like to say the words "state" and "suddenly" a lot. As I continue to read this story, those words are popping up more and more frequently. There are sentences where those words are not needed. For example:
"He turned down the graduation speech," Rangiku suddenly stated,surprising the two men. "I told you that last night."
"So," Isshin shrugged,scratching his shoulder all of a suddenly,noticing some of the recruits to fidget at this.
"I think Ran-chan's getting at is that the boy isn't one to show off. He never revealed his shikai at the academy," Atsuo stated,having been the one to go through the records.
"Ahh…" Isshin suddenly stated,having had the recruits step up to volunteer, something that helped him to weed out any that were to narcissistic,which was ironic as due to what the flower of the division was. "Start calling the names for the ones that haven't gotten up yet and leave Toshiro for last. Oh,and dismiss the others before we call him up."
"You aren't going to kick him out are you?"
Matsumoto became suddenly worried.
| wolfeclipse25 11/20/12 . chapter 2
You hit Toshiro, Momo! How could you!? If Bleach was real... Grrrrr...
| wolfeclipse25 10/13/12 . chapter 42
Great story! I love Toshiro... Not in a romantic way of course.
| wolfeclipse25 10/13/12 . chapter 22
OMG, I love Hyorinmaru!
| Kurama's Foxy Rose 8/6/12 . chapter 12
Kinda like poking a sleeping snake with a stick.
| icewhirlingpages 7/20/12 . chapter 40
and so toshiro became a taicho.
in your face aizen MWAHAHAHAHAHA
| icewhirlingpages 7/20/12 . chapter 35
he called isshin oto-san while in his right mind!
yay go shiro-chan!
note:i hate momo.
| icewhirlingpages 7/19/12 . chapter 22
"I told her… she touches my hair again, I freeze all her shampoos and conditioners,"
that MUST give her nightmares at night...
*doubles over with laughter*
yes about the relationship between shiro-chan and isshi-chan is kinda cute especially when he carries toshi under his arm.
the haircut chapter is a chapter to behold.
and really poor atsou died so early such a shame!
| code ninjahinja 7/8/12 . chapter 31
I find it highly possible that Isshin would want to adopt Toshiro. I actually can totally see him glomping Shiro-chan and asking "Can I adopt you?" XD
| YinYang Moon Dragon 6/8/12 . chapter 42
I love this story. Even though it's kind of sad, I can't stop thinking about it and I can't stop reading it.
| Tala Medori 3/30/12 . chapter 42
hey Yemi Hikari,
lately i have been reading some of your toshiro related fan fics and i think they are great! the idea that Isshin could have been the last tenth captain is cool and you have included him really well. the only thing is that half way through some sentences i find myself not understanding what is happening. but when i read on i start to understand it again.
thanks for being one of the few people to wright this type of fic (ones with Isshin and hitsugaya in them), you really get their charater well.