I like the interaction between them. I'd prefer it a little more... um... adult. But whatever. <3's

Awesome. This is the way that I would love Claire to fight. Very well done.

This is a nice dramatic piece--I like the angst :). Please continue!

Love it. The imagery and phrasing you use is just fabulous (broken Claire/broken room/Sylar as fixer, the memories she calls up and in a way can finally release when she attacks him). A perfect mix of action and thought, details and deeper meaning. Lovely!

WHOA! AMAZING! I can tell you spent a lot of thought and effort on the fight at the end, and I enjoyed it. I enjoyed the entire piece. Great job!

that was awesome love the battle between claire and sylar great job

This is just perfect darling! You got them both down right and I love, love, LOVE Claire in this. She totally needs to kick his ** in canon now) You know I really think there's some of the Claire from the future in this. How she turns out then)) Not so cheerlead-y anymore))
And Sylar that manipulative bastard) Really amazing! Even though you didn't include the glasses))
I adored this! <3

Really fantastic story. Riveting. The characterization was spot on. I hope that the indestructable battle is something the shows writers broach next year; and I hope it takes a route like the one you imagined so heartbreakingly beautifully for us. They need to let Claire vent on the guy, much like the Syelle scene. I like you, think Claire will find this one betrayal too far by her family. Once again fabulous job. Keep it up.