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Kiua
2009-05-21 . chapter 1
For a future fic, I thought it was done the right way. Loved how you gave Jennifer the personality of both Dr. Cox and Jordan. I personally love fluffy fiction. But the question I think I sould answer is should you write another Scrubs future fic? My answer: 10 times yes. Don't get me wrong, how they ended Season 8 was done well. This one shot gave it a little more closure since there's still some un-answered questions from the ending scene of that great episode.
GenkaiShinigami
2009-05-15 . chapter 1
Other than the undeniable squeaness at the beginning, I broke out laughing in class, in a muffled way, anyway with this line -

"Sam pulled nervously on the handles of his Wolverine backpack. (A backpack that, for one reason or another, his Uncle Cox seemed to hate)"

You know that I love you, right? Like, seriously. I also knew everyone right off the bat. :D

This is dangerously sugarcoated with uber sweetness that it's almost deadly, BUT it's in a good way! :D I love it...I love the idea behind it. It makes you really think after what the finale gave to us fans...♥

GYAH!

Why are you so awesome? SRSLY!

Dx
Phoebe-Jeebies
2009-05-12 . chapter 1
Aww, that's sweet!
Khwhitelion
2009-05-11 . chapter 1
...too lazy to log in...

Awe that was sweet :D. Future fics are fun, aren't they?
funkypartyweasel
2009-05-11 . chapter 1
Aww, how I love fluff! :) Poor Sammy; I can see how having two Mum's would cause problems as he grows up...
That bit about the Wolverine backpack made me laugh- plus yay for the inclusion of Jennifer, and ESPECIALLY the mention of "Uncle Cox"!! Wo, Dr Cox still sees JD and his family all the time, so much so that he's called "Uncle"!! Sorry, but anything to do with JD and Dr Cox's relationship makes me squeal with nerdish fangirl glee.
It makes sense that JD would be great at giving heart to hearts to Sammy; we already know how good he is at it by looking at his bedside manner with his patients!
And I liked how you wrote Kim as still being a very loving, albeit busy, mother. Some people like to make her the "bad guy", which isn't fair to her character...so yeah.
Anyway, great story, and Happy Mother's Day!! :)
Black Wolther
2009-05-10 . chapter 1
d'aw ^^
cute fluffs :P
it took me a while to realise who jennie was XD

i was like "jenny...jenny... OH Cox's daughter!"
im a fool :P
Exangeline
2009-05-10 . chapter 1
This is absolutely adorable. I love how you've written Sammy in such a cute and playful way, and Jenny was a nice addition. Doctor Cox's seemingly random hatred for his wolverine bag made me laugh (in the middle of work, no less) but the highlight of this, for me, was the JDElliot relationship. You wrote it beautifully, and I love how it was Elliot he chose, in the end.

You're definitely right, though. We all need a little fluff in our lives. ;)

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Music XnX Lyrics
2009-05-10 . chapter 1
Wow.

This was amazing; I loved how Sam loved both 'Mommy-Kim' and 'Mommy-Elliot' equally. That was a great way for him to differentiate between them! You also wrote Sammy really well; he sounded just like a five-year old should, and the rest of the narrative was very well-written as well.

So cute! One million out of 10 stars.
andaere
2009-05-10 . chapter 1
AWW-WW-WW-WW!! That was SO cute!! I'm drowning in fluff right now... in a good way. I have enough fluff to restuff my teddy bear... -cough- Anyways, I LOVE this!! It's adorable. I love little Sammy, and I'm happy that JD and Elliot ended (is that a word?) up together. I also loved the subtle references to Dr. Cox, and the little cameos of Jen and Izzy. :) Great story, and although it was fluffy, it was disgustingly sweet. Unless you're Dr. Cox. xD

Awesome job, thanks for writing!

P.S. Daddy!JD is amazing. You should write more future!fics. ;)
Owl Emporium
2009-05-10 . chapter 1
That was SO cute! So adorable! Great job; I loved it. (:

Angelica
Amorina
2009-05-10 . chapter 1
OMG! I think I just died from cute overload. What a wonderful little "pancakes and syrup" piece. :D I loved the way you wrote the kids. Sam is adorable, and Jenny is very much her parents' daughter. I also loved your portrayal of Daddy!JD. I nearly melted into a puddle when he was comforting Sam. And the bit about "Uncle Cox" hating Sam's Wolverine backpack was genius. :D

You should definitely write more future fics. I'd especially love to see one about the Christmas party that was shown in the finale.
Tell Her This
2009-05-10 . chapter 1
Aww... I think this has to be one of the cutest things I have ever read!! I absolutely loved it. Sammy was so adorable in his guilt and confusion. And it was very believable too. Excellent work!
Purple Eyed Cat
2009-05-10 . chapter 1
Aw! That was probably one of the cutest things I've ever read! Sammy was adorable, and I loved the fact that he and Jenny were in the same class. I throughly enjoyed all the nods to the show, and JD is an adorable father. Sam's confusion and need to please was so genuiune, I just want to hug him.

Amazing story, and perfect for mother's day! Thank you!
She'sAManiac
2009-05-10 . chapter 1
Sweet, yes. But my favourite food is pancakes and syrup!
Adorable, with a very realistic scenario! I loved it!
And thanks for the reassurance. I dont know what I would have done if JD died in the actual show!
Daphne Crane
2009-05-10 . chapter 1
I really enjoyed this! It was sweet but in a good way. I really loved the Dr. Cox references. His hating the Wolverine lunchbox was really funny. And so was J.D.'s imitation of him. This had heart and humor, a great combination. Very good job.:) I love your writing.
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