I love it! Please cont.

Nice story so far, though I did note that you spelt Na'ane wrong but that is okay, just one little mistake.

I cannot think of any suggestions at the moment, but it would be great if you have a 'Crow' chapter.

Spiders are not my favorite critters. I don't want them dead. I just want them away from me and my stuff. I never want to meet a lime green spider. Poor April. She certainly has her share of problems, doesn't she? Bravo!

There are many fears, I don't know what to advice. But may I ask you to make one chapter about Kian? - It would be funny to see him freaking out about something silly :D

Haha! Aliens! They were afraid of aliens! Splendid idea! :D

Haha! That was awsome! Keep up the good work! :D

I liked it, a lot. Keep up the good work, really.