Several things I really liked about this, but the one thing that I think sort of that's the undertone here that I appreciated was the fact that you kept them/it canon while at the same time gave the characters so much more.

I'm not a big fan of the series because the writing/characters/etc. is really underwhelming, I don't read this fandom either but alas, I read this and really enjoyed it.

I particularly liked the dynamic between them - there is always something lacking there isn't there? They are always saying everything but what they need to, running away and hiding in their corners again before anything can get too serious, too meaningful. The dialogue here, especially Eric, really displayed that.

I particularly liked these two moments:

"she is still staring at all the cars, a false knowing" That is a great moment and I love this tiny bit of insight and depth. Such a small thing like this is so much more effective than going on and on about what she hears and how much it sucks and etc. etc. yawn, yawn.

"He was always so far above such human expectation" Don't know why really, I just like that she sees him in a multifaceted way, even if it's false and sad.

Also, in general, I like the idea of the blood bond being paid careful attention to throughout their interaction. I think its an interesting thing that could be explored to fascinating depths which, unfortunately, isn't in the series.

Thanks.

inriguin story,hope we will have more,i like it.thanks

So, is this a one shot or will there be more? Good enough for a one shot even better as the first chapter.

Simply stunning, you must write an epic

Abstraction,

Moody. Think your writing has potential.

They have a lot to discuss. Sookie was able to call to Eric. It can't be like the way he is supposed to be able to call to her. Her pull can't bew that strong. He is able to feel her emotions, maybe he realized that she needed to see him. Anyway, great beginning, please continue to post.

Excellent, Whoot, Whoot

Totally captures the characters, love the fact that you have they have to have the talk

Great start - wonderful use of words, great storytelling. Looking forward to following this one!

OK now I need more to about this calling thru the bond. Just cant leave me hanging! LOL! Great start.

Excellent start! I hope you're not done!