nice. but you should have put more on the ending

Pretty good ficlet. I think you did a nice job of exploring how Ryou views Yami Bakura, especially with the identicality of the two. But it often gets difficult to tell who you're referring to, since you'll have a whole lot of 'he's in one sentence, and different ones are referring to different people. Try to make it clearer whose POV we're in, and who's matched with which pronoun. But overall, I liked reading it. Good job!

It is nice! Personally I REALLY like tendershipping but thief shipping is alright too! Thanks for the fic! It was really good and kinda sweet!

This was good, except the changing POV's got alittle confusing-I had to read over it a few times to get who was saying what. And did Yami Bakura stab Ryou or was that figuratively? Very emo-but it's all good. Good first attempt at tendershipping-think that I prefer thief also-but am more used to reading and hearing about it from u! You should try a puzzle-could be interesting?! Anyway-nice little oneshot-or are u going to add chapters? =^.^=

Hello, it's the afformentioned random Steve from the future!!

Woohoo, I made a thiefshippy writer write tendershipping! How rare! :3... I suppose I can afford to take the blame, after all, since my love of this pairing is generric, and now appears to be able to be caught like the common cold...XD
Stay back, peoples!! I izz contageous!!
(Grabs Ryou into a very tight embrace)
-sobs- But Bakura! No! Don't you EVER hit your poor beautiful defenceless, loving, soft, gentle, beautiful(lolz, I said that already) Hikari while Seiri's around! (But you know how Seiri really feels about Ryou, so take no notice of her pointless rants...)
(goes to read it again)
-sniffle- Gah, these are the types of fics I usually hiss at and steal poor Ryou away from!
...
Tendershipping abuse must halt! Seiri campains for it!
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Sharp.. that's a nice way to describe Bakura, actually. He is sharp. And I'm so not saying it wasn't well done. Because it was. And since it was such good writing, it made me convinced it happened, which now makes me cry inside...T T

And sorry for ranting off my anger like that in the review. Your fikkie was good, and didn't deserve it. What it(or more importantly poor, unloved little Ryou)needs is a big hug! :D :D (Gah, no... no daydreams, Seiri...!) (hug=?):)
...Anyways, I am shocked (in a good way) that I have caused such material, by the way. :D But don't let me influence you if you don't want to write that pairing...!:D :D
(Was that the oneshot you mentioned you were writing, the other day by the way??)
...Sorry, long review as usual. (and it's not even deep, as these things should be after reading something like that...)But I likey! :D :D yeah.. okay, I'm done.
Keep up the good work!
~seiri~

That was great! I liked it very much! ^-^

wow, this was intense and incredibly edgy, made me catch my breath

NO!
I actually read a tendershipping story...Well my hate for it has been confimred, but it was very well written...I just goning preend he was talking to Malik :(
I'm hoping this sin't a regular thing...we can't lose one of the best thiefshipping authors to tendershipping!
but...it was good...