naww. band camp. have fun lol. update soon. i love how strange and loud callie's sister is.
cheers.

Now you're posting during Band Camp, which it seems has taken your attention to details (like spelling and punctuation) down another notch. It compells me to quote your own words back to you: "Stop. Back away from the computer. Turn Around. Do not return." Not knowing the Spanish is starting stress me, and don't get me started on "pleaseokaythanksgoodbye."

That's not to say I didn't get the gist of this story, because content is fine, amusing at times, even (knocking down poor Nurse Olivia and loving a pager, for examples). Still...

I'll *say* "no spell check used!" SHAME ON YOU, Wish, you should not post before you've done at least *that* much. It makes your readers think you're too lazy to bother - which I know is *not* true. But worse than that, they drop you from their reading list because of it. This may not bother you now, but I bet it will in the long run.

Regarding story content, I can see I was all wrong about the "supportive sister." Well, crap.

'ppreciated the Erica mention, and I loved my mental image of Yang out of the shower.

Though I know you're enjoying the Google translator, I'd like it if you'd include English translations as part of an end note or something. Even though I can pretty much figure out what's being said, my knowledge of Spanish is limited to roughly three words, so it'd be nice to have exact translations, if for no other reason than to broaden my own knowledge.

Lol so I don't know a lick of Spanish but i could actually picture that last scene happen lol loving the story can't wait for an update

I REALLY like the use of Spanish..
make it all the more real.
&It makes me feel smart to know what they're saying.

Are you spanish? Lol.
Anyways, love the story.
Aria seems.. cool even though she's a biotch about the relationships.
That's weird to say.
Update soon, :D

Wow! I didn't think I was going to like this story but jeez, it rules! You write Callie and Arizona so well. And it's so interesting to see Callie's sister. You just write fantastically! Can't wait to read more.

i lol'd alot with this story. Poor Callie. Can't wait to see what happens next. :)

Awsome! Please Carry On!

Aria seems like a pain in the butt...hope she gets better.
good chapter:)
update soon

ah I want to know what happens update soon!!

That was awesome. I loved it. Yang is so funny & I love when writers write Callie & Yang's friendship in Fics W/ Arizona-just makes it better. Interns...Suck-to funy. I love Arizoa/Callie & look forward to reading your next update. Great Job!

Ha, love it.
Can't wait for an update.
Oh, & like the use of spanish in there :]

WOW!
Who does Aria think she is?
Who made her Callie's and Arizona's moral majority?
Now I can understand why Callie was ignoring her phone calls but I'm still hoping that her bark is worse than her bite. Can someone tape Mark Sloan's mouth shut? What is it with him revealing other people's business.
Looking forward to your next chapter.
Thanks for writing. PPS.

Is it just me, or is this the first we've heard Callie even *had* a sister, much less give her a name? (I admit I could've missed something in earlier seasons.) Nevertheless, I could fully believe that of all the relatives who might try to get in touch with Callie would be her sister. Not sure exactly *why* I believe that - perhaps it's based on life experience - but I think maybe a sister would be the most supportive. Or at least the one who'd be the first to reach out.

I liked the deal Callie and Cristina had about the bathroom, but I'm not sure I got the significance.

awesome start - can not WAIT to read more! I'm really intrigued as to what Callie's sister wants! PMS!! (por favor!!)