I like how you went into detail with all what happened with the BSC years later. It's sad that they didn't keep in touch, but this was still an enjoyable little story. ;) And I wasn't really a big fan of Abby, either.

Well, until next time...

STAY GOLD! :D

*Queen Lucy*

:D

This is kind of sad, to think that the BSC never stayed in touch. And you're right, Abby doesn't really belong there either.

poor them but i can totally imagine this happening to them

Aww, I like Abby. Oh well. That was really sweet and sad. Write more BSC fics! :D

i agree with what the reviewer said about it being more of a recap than a story, which is fine if that's what you're going for. the biggest problem is the tenses. sometimes it's written in the past other times the present. my advice would be to take another look at that.

:-)

AL

i think you should make a bigger story out of this now

I haven't read the BSC in a long time so I have forgotten about all the members, but wasn't there Logan, and Shannon as well?

I guess they weren't that big in the books, same as Abby..

I loved those books...

Anyways this is good

you should make a story out of it though

interesting. i enjoy the way you switched POV.

continue?

Mary Anne had moved to a quiet town, a little outside of Stonybrook...

Why bother move to another quiet town...why not stay in Stonybrook? There's no difference.

However, I like the beginning. I may read future chapters.

No offence, but I don't like this. It's not exactly a story, more like a quick recap on what happened to each of the characters. It doesn't make me care about any of them, it's just like 'oh wow, nearly everyone got married/knocked up'. Yay. You have great grammar, you could do a lot better than this.

Oh, wow...only one review? This was really, really, good. (I totally agree with you about the Abby thing, BTW. And I hate how they stereotyped her Jewish-ness! I'm Orthodox and it really ticks me off when people write about Judaism and it doesn't seem they know much about it.) But anyway. You kept everyone very IC. This was an original idea, and well executed, with wonderful spelling and grammar and canon-details. Keep up the good work. _

Very interesting. I like the idea of the story. It would be neat to see you work on each part longer and give more details and more backstory.