LOL! So funny!

Lol, this was hilarious! I really wasn't exepcting that!

hehehehehehehehehehehehe!(cough,cough)sorry it was so funny do more do more!:)

wow... i started lmao though when sasori was... ahem... *blushes* hilarious though, to say the least

lol nice

Oh come on it wasn't that bad.. hell it was hillarious.. I never would have guessed. Hell I give props to the girl that came up with the initial idea and I give you props for even getting the balls to even write the story! lol it was good.

DUDE, LOL!! i <3 it!

LMAO. That was hilarious. xD
Some of my favorite parts:
"“...Danna...” Deidara said blandly, his face mixed with disgust, blandness, and a bit of flattery, “...Danna, did you just orgasm.”" xD He was so straight-forward with it. That was amazing. xD

"“For shits and giggles.”

“Really?”

“No. Now let's keep moving, or I'll stab you in the taint.”

“What the hell is that, un?”

“A place in your body that will hurt like hell if stabbed. Let's. Keep. Moving.” Sasori growled, and Deidara narrowed his eyes." Is that actually real? Haha, cause I've never heard of it. Lolz.

All-in-all, that was frickin' hilarious.

lol love it!! i am soo gonna check out this comic XD

I knew that faping came from somewhere. ;D
Nice story.
The fact Deidara hugging Hiruko never ceases to make me love it somehow...
We, what a cute/kinky story.