Aw, *sniff* I want the boys back together so much! This was wonderful though!

Five Impalas

Love!
So amazing!
Perfect!

That was heart-breaking and caught the older brother's emotions towards the situation very well IMHO.

Dean's heart is shattered for certain.

Very nice and sad. You caught some of the worst moments and exactly how I think Dean is feeling. Very well done.
sid

Hi, So beautifully worded. This is exactly how i imagined Dean to be feeling but would never be able to put the words to paper as you have here. Loved it. x

That seizure or whatever was such a crazy image, huh?

*is curious about the other handcuff incident*

I was furious that the writers left Sam with only a hallucination, why wouldn't Dean or Bobby stay with him? My heart is shattered too. Well written.

Oh, so sad and true. You could see how much it hurt Dean to do that to Sam...excellent job on the short story...really heartfelt.

Loved it. Probably perfect summary of what Dean was feeling when that happened! =[

Captures so well the sadness we are all feeling at the moment. Heartbreaking. Lovely use of both words!
Jane

Oh- Very good piece here -- So much angst for Dean!

"-over his beating heart. But I can't feel my brother." O! Loved that line :D Very depressing piece, though every bit is true. How will they get back to those good days? We'll have to see as the story progresses...Great use of both words!

Me too! That's what the show is all about. We'll just have to take care of each other.

Good one.

Well, rip my heart out of my chest, why don't ya. You're just as evil as Kripke is. Excellent!