And a great ending to a great story... ;)

man, this came out great!

and thanks for the shout-out! :D

ah, this has came out quite good :)

so... is this the end of this story? (or is there one more chapter or so?)

Hi hi,

Great, really great. I like the bit about Ratchet being as bad as Sasha's dad.

One thing though. You said Sasha was a Cezar. Just so you know, the species is Cazar. I know it's probably just a typo, or your word processor corrected it wrong, but I just thought you'd like to know.

But still, I'm really enjoying it, can't wait for the next one.

Bye byes,

Timid Vulpine.

woo! Sasha is better again! :D

btw, you had spelled Greblin wrong. it's spelled "Grelbin". just thought i would point that out to u :)


keep up with the updates!
i gotta know the end of the story!

Whoah!! that was an intense story you wrote there, i abosolutly love it!

But i wonder why on earth would Angela Cross do such a thing...hm i wonder if its a set up?

hmm, so it looks like Ratchet will find Sasha soon...


keep writing!

oh my... things don't look so good for Sasha...

well, keep up the good work with this story! :D

HI keep writing i want to know where this story goes next

Hi hi,

Brilliant! I knew Angela couldn't be the assasin! For a start, she's too much of a clutz.

I await your next update with much eager anticipation, as I want to know who the theif is. You've got me gripped!

Bye byes,

Timid Vulpine.

the story's still going great! :)


P.S.
ehh, i'm not good at leaving good reviews, i'm kinda sucky at it ^^;

nice chapter i like it :)

hey awesome story thus far keep it going please and everyone else who has read this thinks so too so keep it up

I love it :D
"A pissed off Angela..." haha XD yea,he maybe will have her after his tail so far she dont kill him first of mistake XD

Hi hi,

Great story! Love it!

A few tings,

One: Did Angela REALLY do it?

Two: Are you really gonna kill Sasha off?

Three: Is Angela gonne get the death sentence?

OK, that's all I've got. Keep it up!

Bye byes,

Timid Vulpine.

hm... few things to say:
nice "hook" in the beginning
good cliffhanger

i like the story so far :) update soon please!