Aghhhh, I need to know what happens mext! Please update soon! Please please PLEASE?

I just love this so much!

its interesting

Wow, what a terrific story. Read the whole 17 chapters in one sitting! Looking forward to the next chapter. :-)

I am in love with your story. Everything in it flows all together so nicely and I love the long chapters. Hope you continue to write more!

nice chapter
keep on writing more please

Yay! I'm glad they're back on Atlantis again together :) Thanks again for the fast update and another great chapter :)

Have I mentioned how much I love this kid? I love her putting the quarterback in his place. I can't wait to see what other adventures she will undertake.

Michelle

wonderful story! :)

Great chapter :) Loved the cute John and Ali father/daughter scene at the end :) Thanks for the update... I can't wait to read more!

No... all the calm and easiness - ripped away in one moment.

Thanks so much for the quick update! Loved the chapter and I can't wait to read more :)

What a wonderful touching chapter! You did a great job portraying Ali and John's worries and emotions. One of my favorite parts: "It was one thing to be a parent in another galaxy when the child of said parent only had a limited amount of space in which to inhabit. Earth, in a funny way, was limitless."

Yay... what a surprise... Love it... Keep up the good work... Can't wait for more

I liked it. she sure is playing hard to get with calling him Dad

Omg I almost forgot about this story... Please update sooner