Although the story was quite lovely it had a bitter sweet taste to it- how he couldn't just fall in love with her but had to force himself to. Another than that I enjoyed the read.

Wow. This story was not at all what I was expecting. I'm not even sure what I was expecting. But this...wow. So haunting and twisted and angsty and dark and yet somehow lovely at the same time. Very nicely done.

Just found this. Aptly titled. Lovely story. I love happy endings with Martha and The Doctor.

Wow. What a great little AU fic!

That was a really good story. A little sad, but with a happy ending. Martha has always been my favorite. So Thank you!

Oh that was really beautiful, if a little bittersweet.

Only the doctor would force himself to love someone.

I love the happy ending, but I still feel bad that it had to come about the way it did.

Thanks for writing.

Omigod! This is awesome! Its great that there are Ten/Martha fics that reaffirm my love for this ship!

I love it, it's sweet and also a bit heartbreaking. I can't wait to read more :-)

Beautiful chapter, it was very moving. I am yet to find many stories where martha/ten have babies, so I am greatful for this fic.

Keep it going.

Ah, I love this storyy!

I love the way it's written.

Can't wait for the next chapter!

Another great chapter, can't wait to read the aftermath.

All Martha wanted to do was have one dance...but the doctor always gets his way! I love this story, please keep it going.

Very interesting, I am looking forward to more chapters.