 The-Panda-Tamer 2009-05-11 . chapter 1This was the best fic I've read n a long time. Most of the time I cant be bothered to read endless chapters to see how it turns out with Kim n Shego, so the fact that youve made such a satisfying one shot makes it perfect.
And the song you used, by the way, never heard it but the words are just amazing and fit so well. |
 sweetPixiesmile 2009-05-11 . chapter 1This was a lovely song-fic!
Nice pacing of descriptions between versus and chorus. Great integration of the lyrics with the story, with excellent vignettes between. Emotionally charged and well rounded.
A few slightly awkward word choices, but hey, who am I to criticize that?
This was one of those fics where nothing happens, yet everything happens, a microcosm of emotional range.
My favourite part: "My stomach was reduced to a bubbling puddle of goo, and the slow passionate kiss that followed sent tremors up my spine, making my scalp tingle and my skin hot and damp. She was my ‘somebody’, I was sure of it. I still am."
Utterly romantic and touching, an exceptional read. Thank you for sharing. |