Please don't get John nor Olga killed Maybe a little reunion with her daughter, Sunny for a bit) and in one of the story since Revengeance you could make John have the same persona as his father's Jack the Ripper mode and to wield a secret sword (a chokuto) to protect his possible love interest and lover; Sunny Emmerich

It might be too late to review this chapter, seeing that I burned through catching up until your latest chapters but rereading this made me stop and think.

This is probably the first fic in the Metal Gear fanfic section that involves biological rather than nuclear threats. It reminded me that biological and chemical weapons are often referred to as the poor man's atomic bombs and are relatively cost effective compared to nukes as they often leave a contested territory largely intact rather then blow all away, leaving a wasteland. If you wanna PM me I'm all ears. Just don't expect a punctual answer though. I mate be always there.

As for Victor Ward, I wanna know why he built Moses.

Now where is Sunny Now?

I wanna what's next. UPDATE PLEASE!

I would hate to be Sunny.

That commander has to be the worst leader ever. first off he miscounted 4 died. first was dropped in the beginning, his head exploded, the second was lured out, the commander finally noticed the weird sniper after that, the third the commander tried to save. But failed and the forth got taken down soon after. Also, you don't tell your troops that they are going to die. That lowers moral and might get them a reason to bale on the mission.

Well it's interesting seeing the action from the point of view of a badly named spec ops team. The only thing that would give away their position would be the bullet it holes in the walls or at least the blood splatter.

Poor Sunny, she must be going through some serious turmoil

Not gonna lie. Marine Seals is a pretty stupid name for a military group. But interesting seeing them there kinda reminds me of the seals from MGS 2 SOL. I wonder who that was on the other line

Wow. Talk about 2 major blows. Knowing your own mother is a rogue and they have snakes body

Damn Sunny is a beast. She's just kicking ass and taking names. I'm surprised that Olga is still alive

Well. This seems interesting. I appreciate the timeline.

that was quite intriguing i'm on end for the fight :D

Good solid chapter. I'm curious about the white room more and the SEALs. But mainly i wonder about Raiden. Is he around still?

I like the fact the game over sequence was used here. it was creative. PS: What does Victor Ward look like? is he a familiar character already?

I love this story. its just good. I want to draw Sunny for my DA account as fan art is that okay?

The premise is good and all but there are clear mistakes litle but corrected can make this good.
First you called Sunny the predecessor to Solid Snake which is false. A predecessor comes before-prebefore- in which should be before Solid Snake. You meant to say sucessor which is after-Sunny suceeded Solid Snake, came after him. That is basic.
Second you refered to Para-Medic and Signit as having taken their names Dr. Clark and Donald Anderson after their codenames. But Dr. Clark and Donald Anderson are the true identities of them not the codenames.
You should update and fix these mistakes for better clarification. Other than that the story is flawless. I hope to read more.