Hmm... Very very interesting.

Update soon please

this is a good beginning I hope that you will update soon.

so much suspense! I really can't wait for the rest!

Your story intrigues me :) keep going-it has good quality and quite a lot of potential :D

I can't wait to see where you will take this. Keep up the good work and update soon!

Update soon! Interesting storyline!

i think this is quiet a good story! pls continue. i really like where this is going! :)

This is great! i can't wait to read more!!

Great start. I love your use of description; I think it really set the story off without slowing down the pace.

Not a bad start. Good job!

wow... that was quite an opening chapter. very ominous and rather vague. i like it, but make sure not to leave us waiting too long, hmm? :)

This is a really good story so far, I can't wait to see what happens.

oh, WOW,wow, wow; that was very cool (beginning, I hope so);Karigan and Fergal very in character and plot with necromancer seems very interesting to me:)