I've always been a huge fan of the Dragon Trio, especially Giratina, but I've never succeeded in writing a fan fiction about him that had a prayer of being as good as this. Chaos and Nefertili, you are the goddesses of writing. I will be looking forward to the next few chapters.
Like Timeless (which was AWESOME), this story forces the destinies of an all-powerful deity and a young commoner to intertwine in the most unexpected of ways. It reveals the hidden turmoils and emotions of an ancient ghost's heart, and certainly touched me. Tears came to my eyes as I read this story. It reaches into the darkest depths of misery and pulls out hope and friendship like no other story can.

Another beautifully written, amazing, long chapter. It was planned out really well, and I absolutely adore Kuro. I think you two have really thought out her character, and I can see how well developed she is.

I really do look forward to the main story, and if it's as good as the prolouge, you know you can count on me to continue reading and reviewing! ^_^

Personally I'm not really a fan of those [1], [2], etc. tidbits which you insert in your story and go into detail at the end of the chapter. It's just an opinion, I know, but there's always a way to work needed information into a fic. I believe if you post too many author notes which relate to the story the fic can get pretty hard to follow. Nobody likes having to looking back in a story.

There was one thing that Giratina said that left me confused: "I no longer care if I could not leave the Reverse World, as long as you stayed on, Palkia"

Don't you mean stayed here?

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Complaints aside, this chapter was amazing...like all your work. It's nice to see you writing again. One of the things that you really had going for you in Timeless, your other fic, was how well laid out the story was. How the story, while it had a great insight to each of the characters past, was also extremely easy to follow. Don't lose that!

Beautifully written! :) I really like how in character the Dragon Trio are (refering to their gijinkas X3). :D I'm really looking foward to reading more! XD
-D.R.

Wow... Just wow...

It may have taken me around an hour to read, but I am so glad I did. As normal, I'm speechless, so all I can really say is you two (and Ayaluki) should definitely keep it up. I remember you saying about this 'little' project, but I had no idea how awesome it would actually be... Poor Giratina...