i see a few spelling mistakes but thats not really noticeable. i LOVE your story. the plot is really good and i like how everything is really detailed. your a good writer. :) please update very soon i cant wait to find out what happens next!

It's been almost a year and a half with no update, and you haven't seemed to be active at all...so I guess this story won't be completed... :(

I hope you do return and finish this excellent story!

I...need...MORE! THAT WAS SOOOO SUPER AWESOMELY AMAZING! WRITE MORE NOW!

PLZZZ write more O_O i will exslope if you do not O_#

Aw...poor Soul, i hope Maka gets better soon, I dont like it when Soul suffers like this

I love u for writing this! Its really awesome so please update soon!

That was totally epic. :D

There were some parts I didn't really understand in the first chapter (grammer-wise), but it looks like you're doing a great job! The plot's really suspenseful, and I'm raring for some SoMa. Chapter two does clear up what happened, and I'm pretty sure alot of us readers wanna slap Spirit senseless. xDD

Update soon!

i just wanna say, "F* YOU SPIRIT! SOUL'S JUST TRYING TO HELP (even though he's really the cause of the problem... BUT STILL!)!" go soul! fight for your meister!

This was amazing :O

I can't believe Spirit though ahaha. Man he can be such a pain.

But woah, honestly this was good.

I hope there might be more added on later! :)

suspensful

very suspensful and mysterious.

everyone is on edge, not quite knowing what is going on yet.

do hope you continue this.

O.o trying...to...review...too astounded... At awesomeness...to put love... Of chapter... In words...

I loved the character's different reactions in this chapter. Marie trying to boost Soul's morale, Stein, forever serious...and poor Spirit. Very nice. Once again, I loved the descriptions of everything. It's very easy to picture what is going on.

Good luck with the next chapter!

the plot is very good but what i found that stood out and kept me interested in this fic is how youve manipulated the words, keeping my attention throughout the whole story

almost abstract in a way...

there were no hard descriptions that keep you going over it to fully understand the phrase - this is straightforward in a very emotional way (almost cried in both chapters actually...)

quite amazing as well how their actions seem enough to tell the story

the reactions you gave them were realistic - very well done that i felt the panic in the words you used

amazing so far great work!

Aw, common Spiri, be nice to pour Soul... he's just as hurt as you are...

Aw, yay Stein and Marie being awesome the way they are...

God, I wanna know what happens next! *flail* Please update soon! *send Maka get-well-soon card and flowers*

please continue! what happened to maka? O.o