|Reviews for Masen and Swan: The FBI’s Most Unwanted|
| vampdreams 4/12/13 . chapter 1
its like all that i love rolled into one...
love the way you two write...its totally unreal..._
| dbpbatm 9/3/12 . chapter 1
Really fun little read! Thank you for sharing it.
| artsyduckpout 8/23/12 . chapter 2
Amazing! I'll admit that it was extremely creepy but I liked your take on the FBI scene! Great collaboration and I wish I was around the fanfic scene more so I could have voted for it in the contest :)
| Siriusmunchkin 12/4/11 . chapter 2
That was short and sweet.
| Siriusmunchkin 12/4/11 . chapter 1
That was great. It was fun and funny.
| HPPhoenix07 5/4/11 . chapter 1
This is one of my favorite fanfics of all time! Seriously. The mystery got me hooked right from the beginning and the tension between those two just makes it ten times better. Excellent job! ]
| hello 2/2/11 . chapter 2
i really liked this story. ncis and monk are two of my favorite tv shows so this really appealed to me. however i noticed the dedication to daddy's little cannibal at the end, and i hate to be the one to tell you this; but the truth is dlc is alive and well. she faked her death to get out of fanfiction. if you do not believe me, just google "daddy's little cannibal death fake". i would supply you with the links to the various discussions on sites such as a different forest, but removes the links so that is hopeless. again, i am very sorry to be the messenger of this news, but believe me, i am not lying.
also, i really liked this story, and i am now going to read the next part of it.
| Fire-Sendo 11/4/10 . chapter 1
i liked the mystery maybe a bit predicable with the use of james name. i love the developing of bella and edwards relationship
| basketsarah120 9/20/10 . chapter 1
I knew it was James.
| Apollo Fox 8/4/10 . chapter 1
Hi! I know this review is very late, as in like a year late, but I really wanted to let you know how much I loved this story! You really are an excellent writer. Thanks for posting this genius story for the world to enjoy!
| AwkwardGirlisAwkward 7/11/10 . chapter 1
Oh my god I think I just read the best Twilight Fanfic... EVER (Well The other two of these are in a tie with it... but whatever...)! No really! I am absolutly in love with this series (The... Masen and Swan Saga... Ha-ha just kidding...).
Well sorry for the useless review!
Please send out 'episode 4' soon!
(If you are going to reply, please use my PM, as of me forgetting my password to my email)
| Jane's Rage 6/1/10 . chapter 1
| u2shay 3/29/10 . chapter 1
Love Twilight, love X-files! What could be better? :)
| OcherEloquence 12/29/09 . chapter 2
This story is incredibly amazing and it's only (technically) one chapter! Please, oh, please continue with this extraordinary story! I love how Bella and Edward have a strong emotional conection while keeping it professional, I absolutely love it. Can't wait for the next "Episode". Oh, this thought just occured to me! A great thing to keep this whole FBI (more than one) case thing going why don't you name each chapter according with the case? But not a title a blunt and obvious as "Burned Sisters" or something like that, I don't really know... that's a stupid title. What I mean is a title that will keep the readers guessing until the end of the chapter and then they understand it like "Blue Muse" (I don't really know... again, stupid title. Yeah I'm not really good at that.) Sorry if you already had this idea, I as just trying to help and sorry about the rambling I tend to do that at four in the morning. Well, again, love your story! Please update as soon as you can!
| Cullensporks 12/11/09 . chapter 1
I love this story/oneshot so much. I *cough* happen to love a shirtless Edward, tied uponmybed ;) I love yuor stories, your amazing writers