will you continue? :)

I forgot to say this last chapter: hehe, self-insertion.

Also, this chapter was ridiculous, in both content and length. You ought to be ashamed of yourself. Why, back in my day, when we posted a chapter, we had to walk uphip both ways in the snow for 5 miles, so we sure as hell made sure it was a damned good one! Razzumfrazzum hurf durf durf...

Oh lordy. What a ridiculous excuse for a story. I like it. Crackfic, indeed. Also, discrepancy: You say this -
"Seems to be, Hermione. But he's far to old for you. 25, according to Dumbledore."

"Really? But he doesn't look a day over 20."
- when she hasn't even seen him yet.

CONTINUE.

Heeheehee...loved the NONrevelation of his name of his name... so funny, I just kept laughing.
Favorite line? "This is all so - Tonks, why don't you zip that back up and finish that thought when we get back to your place - all so new." - Cackle...heeheehee.

WTF's up with Nymph(o)dora? You kill me, Christopher!

How do you do that? It's as if you're enjoying the genre and poking fun of it at the same time.

I'm thinking Tonks may end up at the school doing something unbecoming in front of students if she doesn't learn to control herself. Fabulous and hilarious as always.

HILARIOUS! I can't wait for more!

That new teacher isn't, by any stretch of fancy, Carey Grant?

See Operation Petticoat, 1959.

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I am amused by this story, so continue if you can. Though, to look at that last sentence, I wonder why I--and thousands of other reviewers--feel that we must give out permission to writers to continue. Take my note as encouragement rather than a demand.

Your obedient servant,
A.A.

Well, pretty interesting start. The stuff with Dobby was hysterical, and I dug the over-description of this new professor through Hermione's eyes. Have authors really written her like that? To be honest, I've done a pretty good job of avoiding these Gary Stu/author insertion stories. Man, do they really start off like that?

Anyway, promising start. What other insanity do you have in store for the masses?

I'm so torn between being in awe of your writing, and hating this story with the passion of a thousand fire-y etc. It looks absolutely horrifically awful, but I think that was your intention. The description of this mysterious professor - you - was as painful to read as it was hilariously overdone. Oh well. I rather hope you continue. Please? Actually no, don't, it's too bad (but in a good way!)...I'm subscribing anyway, no self-control...

luv the detail to the characters

Oh F-!

So the first half was wonderfully lulzy, with the trademark respitechristopher snarky dialogue.

Then you got to "Hermione stopped dead in her tracks..." And I need a new laptop.

That was spittake inducing. Like I couldn't drink anything while reading for fear of ruining more electronic equipment and choking.

That was the right kind of wrong.

This must needs has updaetez, plzkthxbye!

Wonderfully enjoyable story. :)

Interesting beginning of the story. You've got a proper male veela, there. I wonder what happens when Hermione figures out the Ramones bit.

(Just as an aside, it's the Niagara River that goes over the Falls. The simile works beautifully, however.)