I like it.

I've meant to review this for awhile. I really like this story it looks very promising! I really hope that you update soon.

I like it. Update soon.

Thanks so much for making the next chapter. It was fantastic! But im sort of confused. Was Hiruko in the hospital before or after the Great EarthQuake? But thanks again and I don't mind if u don't make the next chapter on time, as long as it doesn't take 1 month to make it, but I'll forgive u if the is a good excuse for y the next chapter is gonna be really late. Sayanoria!

Thank you for writing this story! I've been tring to find a Night Inspector story that is sort of a love story that involved Hiruko and some mysterious girl. Please make a Hiruko love story like this one and maybe a Night Inspector Crossover. That would be wonderful! Peace out!
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A friend of Hiruko's? And a ghost at that? Well, I think she's a ghost. Nice guessing, Hifumi, but not right at all.

Whoo-hoo, am I glad somebody's writing fanfiction for this series!!
Great first chapter; very intriguing. The way Hifumi kept guessing about Tsukiyo's nightmare was funny. XD They always do have some sort of trick ending; i can't blame him for asking..
Anyway, nicely done so far. Is this a serial? If it is, I look forward to seeing more. ^.^